-Project: ares (kth) ‗ ❍


Reviewer: May SeokJins_Yeonin_rh

•Book: PROJECT: ARES [K.TH]

•Author: space-lattae

Dᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ: 4.5/5

It did, I was really looking forward to reading your book. 

Disclaimer: I'm a Greek mythology fan too and I love Rick's works, please I love them. 

And I love your work as well but avoid using bold, the way you have written is nice but don't bold it and you definitely don't need to put it in brackets. 

Cᴏᴠᴇʀ: 3.5/5 

That's a funky cover and I love how the title is written even though you can't understand what's written there properly and you see around Taehyung? It's so empty, try to use some non-filled stickers [like the ones used in K-drama openings, like those stickers], it will look nicer. The font spacing is really low so it's hard to understand the title but we have the title written under it so we are good, I guess. 

Tɪᴛʟᴇ: 5/5

Okay, it gave me a wrong idea of the plot. I thought Ares was Taehyung like you know how the gods change their names when they come to the mortal world and stuff so I got a wrong idea first but I won't say it's a bad title, maybe translate it to Greek to make it relate more? But it's a 5 out 5 from me because it doesn't even say anything at all about the plot and it misguided readers a bit so the events catch them off guard and they read with more enthusiasm with the thought "Why did the author name it like this despite it not going with the plot?" 

Fɪʀsᴛ Iᴍᴘʀᴇssɪᴏɴ: 5/5

The marks say it all, I was really impressed with it. 

Rᴇᴀᴅᴇʀs Iɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ: 10/10

Many positive comments, keep it up! 

Sᴛᴏʀʏ Pʟᴏᴛ: 8.5/10

Unique and rare and really indulging but as it's still ongoing, can't promise anything. 

Pʟᴏᴛ Tᴡɪsᴛ: 8/10 

Let me tell you, even if you don't have any plot twists your characters are really unique and enjoyable so it would easily get you many reads but in awards and stuffs, this part will be judged so you should give good ones instead of obvious ones. 

Gʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ: 8.5/10

Your grammar is really good except I found typos, not too many but not too less either, nothing proof-reading won't solve and also improper capitalisation. There should be capitalisation after speech marks and in nouns and when you start a sentence after full stop. 

Eᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs Aɴᴅ Fᴇᴇʟ: 10/10

The character was feeling tired and surprisingly, I felt that and I was feeling tired along with her— I mean, what type of sorcery is this? 

Cʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ Dᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴇᴍᴇɴᴛ: 8.5/10 

I love the characters a lot. Really enjoyable and I do see development in them but again, it's an ongoing book so we can't promise anything. 

Wᴀʏ Oғ Wʀɪᴛɪɴɢ: 9.5/10

Your writing kept me so indulged in your book, I was afraid I won't be able to write you a review at this rate. 

But there were some sentences that I had to re-read because the sentence either was a bit complex or an addition of an unnecessary word was there. Your style is heavy and descriptive, I love it. 

Oᴠᴇʀᴀʟʟ: 10/10 

I wanna say that I'm keeping the book in my library, it's a masterpiece. One more thing, try to write shorter paragraphs, long ones can make readers lose interest no matter how good a book is. 

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥: 91/100

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