By: @nyctophili4n_

Reviewed by: _writing_beauty_

Description: 4.5/05

Firstly, your description is amazingly written. Even without any dialogue or heavy interesting words, it is still remarkable. It is informing what the story is about, it instructs about the characters, which absolutely no author does. Like a perfect professional description, it contains everything.

Cover: 03/05

Cover, it is messy. It doesn't match the story's theme either. The story is about college love and angst, so you may quite use pictures related to that. Even if I put that aside, the cover is not very clean. The male's head is too big, and the female is too small, almost not visible. While the fonts and texts are good.

Title: 4.5/05

The title is favourable, matching the story theme. It also gives quite an idea to the reader about the story, quite nice.

First impression: 03/05

The first impression, to me because of the cover, got rather down. Except for that, the first impression was wonderful. The prologue itself tells a lot about the story, which made me quite interested in the story, which I knew already when I read it.

Reader's interaction: 04.5/05

It does not matter how many votes or reads you have, readers normally prefer reading the story which is completed, because who knows if authors will continue further or not, so don't worry, but it's quite disappointing how good books don't have many reads.

Story plot: 12/15

At first, I thought it would be like any other book, like an innocent girl and bad boy thing, cliché plot in two words. But reading the first chapter itself says a lot. The story plot is amazing.

Plot twist: 04/10

The only plot twist till yet was that the female lead knew the main lead was going to use her, except for that, till yet, I haven't seen any plot twists, but again, it just has 9-10 chapters so it's okay, it's fair for starting 10 parts.

Grammar: 08/10

Your grammar is also incredible, to be honest, I didn't see any grammatical mistakes, errors or spelling mistakes.

Emotions and feel: 09/10

Since the story is written in a good way, the emotions and feelings are very much relatable and I felt the emotions and feelings, not many scenes were there because again, the story isn't completed.

Character development: 02/10

I think you know the reason, no character development yet. None of it. The story just has 9 parts, so it doesn't have any character development yet.

Way of writing: 9/10

To be honest, your writing style is really good. Vocabulary, grammar and style, everything was there.

Overall: 07/10

Overall, quite a nice story, Catchy and appealing. I think I've already told you your flaws and how you can improve. That's it.

Total: 70.5/100