Reviewer : May SeokJins_Yeonin_rh

Book : Oneshots

Author : Vivi_0304

𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐞𝐫 𝐂𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐚

Dᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ: 0/5
That’s not a description. You can say philosophical things related to the human mind and imagination in the blurb to attract readers, and then at the end say this is your book of Oneshots, something along those lines. 

Cᴏᴠᴇʀ: 1/5 

Imple, doesn’t match the theme. I feel like that the color scheme does not match or suit it even though any color is possible in a oneshots book. Maybe some edited pictures of the members would look good and try to go for a neutral color, a graphics designer will be able to tell better. 

Tɪᴛʟᴇ: 1/5
Common and nothing to look forward to. You can actually name a Oneshots book so do that. 

Fɪʀsᴛ Iᴍᴘʀᴇssɪᴏɴ: 1/5
Nothing made me wanna read it, I didn't find it that much attractive. 

Rᴇᴀᴅᴇʀs Iɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ: 0.5/5
It's pretty low. Everything is low. 

Sᴛᴏʀʏ Pʟᴏᴛ: 9.5/15
It was interesting, if I take in the concept only. The characters met in a very cliche way. The pace was too fast and the flow was rough, you jumped from this place to that place, everything was scattered. 

Pʟᴏᴛ Tᴡɪsᴛ: 8/10 
The twist was a bit unexpected so I would say that you did a good job with it. 

Gʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ: 2/10
Your sentence structures are kinda okay but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes, it wasn't hard for me to read though. 

Eᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs Aɴᴅ Fᴇᴇʟ: 2/10
Everything was happening so fast that I didn't feel anything, you need to slow down and explain the events properly. 

Cʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ Dᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴇᴍᴇɴᴛ: 6/10 
I did see but it was way too sudden, you went from 0 to 100 with a few words where you should have taken it slowly. The characters matched the plot. 

Wᴀʏ Oғ Wʀɪᴛɪɴɢ: 1/10
You really need to improve this part, I know you can do better so I suggest reading best seller books. 

Oᴠᴇʀᴀʟʟ: 3/10 
The concept and plot was good and I would have enjoyed it more if you improved the ones I mentioned above. Even if the chapter becomes too long when you describe fully but you still need to take that chance and it's okay as long as it remains in a single chapter. 

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥: 35/100

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