Reviewer : Lily A_Tiger_Lily

Book: Nyctophile : BTS oneshots

Author: RihisNation7

Blurb: 2/5

I know it's a one shot book and the blurb of these books are not attractive. Yet you can make it attractive by using any dialogue, scene or quote. You can also use the genres you are gonna write. 

Such as mentioning it like: 

Mafia au

Arrange marriage

Happy and sad

A roller coaster of emotions….

Dive in, make a request and enjoy your own world with your bias. 

Cover: 4/5

It was perfect and worked well with. It was good and pictured each and every person equally. Good job in crossing the background as well as the text is matching and good.

Title: 3/5

It is surely good and eye-catching but I would recommend you to change the font style of the title. It is confusing and the deranged form is, even though it shows a modern style of writing but still, it is very difficult to read it at once. People usually read the title written before seeing it in book covers. 

First impression: 4/5

I was really impressed and amazed by the beauty of your work and accepting the requests. It was good and left a good impression on me. I wanted to explore your works and your intro as well as the starting made me curious to read more.

Reader's interaction: 8/10

People are certainly enjoying the short yet cute and collective shots you are writing. Well done. 

Plot: 7/10

In one shot, they are different from the novel as well as the story. We can't call them a book as well. Plot covers the whole life of main characters, discusses the characters deeply and goes with a sequence of different events, however, the same can't be said for one shot. We can refer to them as one of those events discussed briefly and presented to us separately. Therefore, they don't cover the huge impacts of story line and events, it lacks the plots. But I was amazed by the fact and your writing style,you pull short stories up with a good impression. 

Twist: 6/10

As we have discussed before, one shots lack plots and discuss only one event in the life of a character therefore it also lacks this major factor of a story. There is no major twist seen. 

Emotions: 6/10

Emotions are lacking at some places but at some places they are explained briefly. I would suggest you to go deeper in characters and depict their misery and compare them to your own self. Get yourself in their shows and see what you would have done if you were to be there. This will help you to develop them. 

Grammar: 9/10

This factor is good for you. You dealt with situations well and chose suitable words for them. Your grammar is good. 

Character development: 8/10

As it is not a whole well plotted story but short events written beautifully, yet the author has done such a good job in showing us the characters behavior and their deeds. Their behavior was clear as crystal and no confusion was there. They seemed to be developed throughout the story. Good job. 

Writing style: 9/10

Your writing style is good and you are getting good with this as you are writing more and more. You handled the situation well and caused the reader to get into the story with you and feel the scene despite your weakness in the emotions part. 

Overall: 8/10

Total: 76/100

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