Reviewer: 786vkmaknae

Book: My heartbeat

Author: NimishaTrivedi

Title: 3/5

It matches the story or not,  I can't say because the story is not written more and not explaining the reason behind this name.

Cover: 3/5

This needs a lot of improvement. You can take help from a graphic shop. 

Blurb: 4/5

It gives an idea of the book. It's interesting and eye-catching. 

First impression: 3/5

To be honest, I had great hopes with it. But the first impression was not good. What I felt off was the scene uncovering. I meant to say, you should focus on background as well as surroundings too. Describe the daily event as the memory of the character. It will help the reader to understand the dynamics and situation well.

Reader's interaction: 9/10

However, here I think I might get wrong following the upper description but your story is liked by many and they want to know what happened next. Well done. 

Plot: 7/10

It's good but not unique. What makes it stand different is your style. 

Twist: 6/10

Not seen any special twist up now. Maybe because this story has only 4 chapters till now.

Grammar: 8/10

Little mistakes here and there but not too much. I hope you can edit them.

Emotions: 6/10

Not felt anywhere, it was like I was reading a plain essay. I don't mean to offend you, just wanna say the emotions are what gives the words a life. You need to improve that sector.

Character development: 6/10

As I have mentioned before, there are only 4 chapters, I can't see any development.

Writing style: 7/10

Even though your style is good, you need to work upon it. Don't be offended or get sad,you have the potential to be a writer because your words matter.

Overall: 6/10

I can't say I didn't enjoy the first parts of the story. It is good but needs improvement. I am hoping to see a better version of this in the near future. Keep going.

Total: 69/100

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