Reviewer : KeonMin_X

Book : Meeting the prince in the rain

Author : DreamCatcher_flics

Description:3/5

The description indeed had some points where a reader can be intrigued but I'd rather like to say that it could've been better. Maybe adding more incidents that are more interesting? Like you can add a part of their conversation. Notab normal one but a one in the middle of a heated one perhaps? I'm sure you have seen them in book descriptions before and in my opinion they make me more interested to read the book than anything.

Cover: 2/5

The cover gives away the story line well and it describes it. But the font used for the title can be much better. Maybe a one that can make it more highlighted. Maybe adding a descriptive quote may be much better. It was a plain but nice colour scheme actually. So maybe change the title font and it might be good.

Title :4/ 5

Unique name. Matches the storyline as well. It's a catchy one, I have to add and also liked it very much. I like to suggest adding it's a jjk story or a note at the end of the title so the readers can easily see it. If someone was in a hurry for a Jungkook story, when they don't see the JJk story part they might ignore the book. It's important to think how the readers will be attracted so I suggest paying much more attention to small details like these.

First impression:3/ 5

Well I myself isn't a very attentive reader of Jungkook X yn so you get my point here. But I've read them plenty enough and your book cover and title did make me interested to read the book. But as I said in the cover section, I think the cover can be more eye-catching. If it was an eye stealer, it would surely leave the readers interested to read the book in no time. Your book isn't one of those, of which people are intrigued just by the glance to click in and see but your story was surely attractive after all.

Readers Interaction:07/10

I think there was a good reader interaction as I saw how they have commented. But it seems that the book has been lacking in updates which can lead the readers to lose interest as the time passes. It might be a personal problem not for me to interfere but the more frequent you update the morer readers keep engaged to read the book.

Story plot: 07/10

Actually a very interesting plot about Jeon twins or maybe they aren't. But I have to say that in the first chapters the incidents felt kind of somewhat cliche but considerable. I also think the book seemed a bit rushed. I think if you let more space for emotions and take the book in a slower and a steady pace it would be much better. Like in the first chapter already loads of things happened. It would be better if they were described more and went a bit slowly for readers to absorb the story.

Plot twist: 07/10

There were few and after all it's only in chapter five so it's obvious for it to lack in twists. But in chapter five there were surely twists present. I'm sure you will add more interesting twists in future chapters and end with cliffhangers. They are usually what can keep readers engaged to know what's going to happen next.

Grammar : 09/10

Grammar was fine. There were few errors here but they were seldom good. There were places which needed 'Then, Than' and also you have used a simple letter to start after quoting commas which should be used capitals to start. Others were fine and vocabulary was also fine. I think all together you have done a very good job with grammar!

Emotions and feel: 08/10

There weren't many emotional incidents yet so I can't say much. But I think emotions would've been expressed better. I think that's the only main aspect which lacked as I said earlier, you have been going at a vast speed the emotions expressed lacked. The story would be much better if the emotions were described more as the readers will surely be crying or laughing if it were done.

character development: 08/10

Characters were fine and Jungkook is really cute sometimes. Main lead girl had those traits were most books have so it was kind of not that interesting but there were changes from some places so it's not bad. I think you should make their actions a bit out of the box as usual and then it would be much more interesting book to readers.

Way of writing : 08/10

It was good. But it would be better if you could go a bit beyond the same vocabulary we use everyday in a book as it increases its beauty. I also noticed that some parts needed more explanation. If you could try to use more adjective sentences it would be very interesting. Authors can play with words and that play is one of main reasons why readers get interested to keep fading the book. So rather than writing with usual sentences try being unique and catchy. But don't forget that the main point is to share your ideas to the readers and not to make them confused.

Overall : 08/10

Overall nice, intriguing story. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. There were only a few weaknesses and already it's a good book to read. You nice keep going!

Total: 74/100

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