Reviewer: rabisworld02

Story: Masked Swan

Author: blaze-bangtan

Title: 5/5

Blurb: 3/5

Cover: 3/5

First impression: 4.5/5

Reader's interaction: 10/10

Plot: 9.5/10

Twist: 8/10 

Grammar: 8/10

Emotions: 7/10

Character development: 7/10

Writing style: 9/10

Overall: 8/10

Total: 83/100

Review:

This story is really great. Have amazing dynamics and beautiful style. But about the cover, the background is also gray and white and the font is also white. It is not suitable. What I mean to say is you can take help from a graphic shop and make the cover more mysterious with the picture somehow of guns or some dark alley and Jimin's pic in the background. But if you want to keep the same cover then you can change the font style and color. Other things, you need to focus on emotions. Even though you wrote their conflicts really beautifully, you need just a little more improvement. Rest is good. I am looking forward to the next update.

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