Reviewer: rabisworld02

Author: Irtiza_yesmeen

Book: Lullaby

Title: 4/5

Blurb: 4/5

Cover: 4/5

First impression: 3/5

Reader's interaction: 9/10

Story plot: 9.5/10

Twist: 7/10

Grammar: 8/10

Emotions: 9.5/10

Character development: 7/10

Writing style: 7/10

Overall: 7/10

Total: 79/100

Review

It's a unique and good story. But what I want to say is, you have written every scene for so long. I mean it's good to focus on background and character conflicts but don't write too much. I mean use some dialogues too. Your paragraphs and explainings are long but no dialogues or monologues would make the reader's interest lessen. However, writing style is good but you can make it better by making your paragraphs short. You explained everything in detail which is good but it will make the reader lose interest.

Focus on the character's emotions and background. This needs a little bit of improvement. Surely, your idea is unique and your writing style is good, just a little improvement and you will rock. Good job.

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