By: -snowine

Reviewed by: _writing_beauty_

Description: 03/05

Well, it's not very good, but not very bad either. You can improve it by telling something about the story, by giving a quiet idea about the story plot like a paragraph at the bottom of the dialogues. The dialogues do make the description very interesting, so it's fine.

Cover: 03/05

The cover is not very nice, but the way fonts and texts are, is very appealing, it looks good. But the subtitles are not very visible, you may make them larger or add black strokes that will make them more visible.

Title: 4.5/05

The title is amazing, I'll say. It matches the story's theme, probably better than anything else. Even the way it's typed is good.

First impression: 03/05

First impressions matter, you know the prologue quite gave me the idea that the female lead is going to have a crush on Jimin. Wasn't even surprised when it came true, the prologue could have been better, by making it more interesting. It looked cliché.

Reader's interaction: 04.5/05

Your book does have a good amount of votes and reads, so yeah.

Story plot: 12/15

I'm not a very big fan of sad endings, to be honest, and after a few chapters, I knew it would have a sad ending. Though the plot is good, it's still quite cliché.

Plot twist: 04/10

About plot twists, there aren't many, but yeah there are, it was interesting to read, yeah the female lead should not have suicide but guilt makes you do things.

Grammar: 08/10

The grammar was good and since the story is edited, there are no errors or spelling mistakes.

Emotions and feel: 09/10

The parts aren't in much detail, it could be better, but they aren't bad, it still makes you feel every emotion. It was good.

Character development: 07/10

There were character developments, in every character, both the main lead and female lead. So yeah.

Way of writing: 05/10

The writing style is good so far, but you need to write in detail, you didn't even explain/show how Jungkook and Y/N met, just Jimin's meeting with her for the first time. You did a time skip of seven years just after the prologue. That's not a problem, but that doesn't look good.

You are supposed to tell the relationship between Jungkook, Jimin and Y/N after you skipped the time, it makes the reader confused. A separate paragraph, tells the relationship between all of them. It makes a good reflection on the reader.

Overall: 07/10

Overall, the story was good, for someone who does not like sad endings, it was still good.

Total: 70/100