By: -snowine

Reviewed by: TuesdaysLeftovers

Description: 5/5

The description is really well written and intriguing, and I like how it beckons the reader to actually read the question with your use of rhetorical questions

Cover: 4/5

This cover is well-made and perfectly displays one of the main characters. My only issue would be that the subtitle text is a bit hard to read, even on my computer.

Title: 5/5

The title is perfect as it simply depicts the main idea of the book.

First Impression: 5/5

This book starts off really well. I loved how the first thing that was shown in the first chapter was a note written by y/n, as it sets the tone of what kind of book this will be.

Readers Interaction: 5/5

(Remember, the amount of readers and how much they interact with the book does not determine anything about the quality of a person’s writing. Reader’s interaction varies from many different things such as the writing style itself or amount of author’s notes among other things.)

This book has a lot of comments and votes, meaning your writing is engaging.

Story Plot: 14/15

This story is one of the best I’ve ever read and I’m not saying that to just be nice, it simply just is. The way that you write about a specific social issue (letting go of unrequited love) is something that isn’t often seen in fanfiction and I love how you crafted it in this book that perfectly portrays the emotions and feelings that come with it. I love how the book is essentially a story that displays a progression through the different stages of falling in love and letting someone go, and I love how the chapter titles pretty much describe such stages. This book seems to prioritize plot over fanservice, which is a good thing as prioritizing fanservice is a common culprit=t for what makes a good book. In this section of my reviews, I usually write out a list of critiques, but this time, there really aren’t any. I only have two small points:

-Because the little notes that you use are pictures, people reading offline wouldn’t be able to actually see them.

-People usually don’t speak out loud, and the only literary context that I’ve seen people speak their feelings out loud would be in Shakespeare’s works. When Taehyung says his feelings out loud for everyone to hear, it kind of just seems like plot convenience.

Plot Twist: 9/10

The plot twist when y/n was going to show herself, but then another girl came in to swoop Taehyung away before her eyes was really shocking, but in a good way. The feelings that came with this encounter were really well described.

Grammar: 10/10

When I read, I did not find a single grammatical error or error in punctuation or capitalization.

Emotions and Feel: 10/10

The emotions were really well described. Like I said in the Story Plot section, this book perfectly portrays the emotions that come with loving someone and letting them go. You wrote your emotions and feels deeply tied to the characters and the themes, which is really good.

Character Development: 10/10

The development of y/n throughout the book is really well explained and the reasons for her change are portrayed well and are not unreasonable or questionable.

Way Of Writing: 9/10

You wrote this book in a really direct tone, but that is not necessarily a bad thing. Books written in first person are usually written with this tone. Despite using a direct tone, you managed to portray emotions really well.

Overall: 10/10

This book is the highest scoring book I’ve ever read in my reviewing career, and it definitely deserved it. In all honestly, I did not really expect much when I first started reading, but this book was written really well and perfectly portrayed emotions and that made it engaging. This book is really impressive and it is clear that you are a very talented writer. You should be proud of yourself!

Total: 96/100

If you have any questions, need clarifications, or elaborations about what I wrote here in this review, feel free to ping me (@TuesdaysLeftovers) in a comment and ask, I’ll try to answer as soon as possible. Thank you and have a nice day!