Reviewer: A_Tiger_Lily

Author: zz_JiminShi_zz

Book: Insane

Title: 3/5

The story has only 9 chapters and the connection between title and story is not revealed yet. 

Cover: 3/5

It's really good, the background is good but I would like you to change the font size and color. It is mingling with the background. Make it highlighted. 

Blurb: 3/5

Even though the story is going good, the blurb is plain. Try to add some dialogues in it. 

First impression: 4/5

I felt like maybe it is just a simple story of a beaten up boy and another one rescuing him. But no.... As the story goes on, it explains further. 

Reader's attraction: 7/10

I think the story is in the beginning process, that's why it doesn't have many people, however the ones who are reading it, want it to update. I myself am looking forward to it.

Story plot: 7/10

Till now, it's simple and doesn't have many twists. But in the latest chapter, the author has spiked up the interest. Looks like it will be a unique book.

Twist: 6/10

Not much yet.

Grammar: 8/10

It is good but it needs improvement.

Emotions: 8/10

Even though the chapters are short, emotions are described and explained briefly. 

Character development: 7/10

The chapter's story has n't shown any development. 

Writing: 8/10

It is unique and something which is making this book stand separately. However I would recommend you to grab a hold on the vast vocabulary.

Overall: 8/10

I enjoyed it very much and am waiting for the next update. 

Total: 70/100.

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