Reviewer: Rabi rabisworld02

Author: taelovee30

Book: Hold on

Description: 3/5
It is not describing the story well and also the reader can't get what's the story is about. You can write any interesting scene and dialogues to make it more catchy.

Cover: 4/5
Its really good and beautiful. However I think only if the sharpness or lightening effect of the font could get light.

Title: 5/5
It is unique as well as suits the story line and plot well. Really good choice.

First impression: 4/5
In first chapter I liked it very much. It was light and didnt have immediate tense atmosphere as most of the ffs. It was good and interesting.

Reader's interaction: 7/10
As this author is new therefore this book doesn't have much votes or reader but I am sure about those who are reading, are waiting eagerly for the next update.

Story plot: 8/10
After the first  chapter, the feelings I got were that of some book with idol x idol love, then getting revealed and then facing some cliché problems and that's all. But no, this story plot is unique and different. it shows and throws lights on various factors of an idol life. And I really love it.

Plot twist: 8/10
This plot doesn't have some twists which will make the reader feel twisted or anxious but surely it contains some scenes which I think can be labelled as major plot twists. Such as jungkook's reaction in the latest updates.

Grammar: 8/10
Author has good grammar and has a firm grip on words but the grammar needs a bit improvement.

Emotions: 9/10
This story has some major effects for this factor. It surely has the way to make reader wanting to cry in agony or laugh in amusement.

Character development: 7/10
I think it is very slow paced but can be feel. However, i suggest for the author to use normal pace for character's personality.

Writing style: 9/10
We at here finally. I really appreciate your writing style. It made me feel anxious, joy and stress. Your writing style is alive and really creative. I didn't expect this story to show the back life, stress and depression the face. You really showed that the life is not easy for the idols. Where they are standing now is only the result of all the hardships and motivational self of them. Thank you.

Overall: 8/10

Total: 80/100

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