Reviewer: RabisRubie

Book: His dominant love

Author: Jellycuddles19_

Blurb: ⅘

It was good and catchy enough. It spiked my interest up and I read it further. It has the ability to catch reader's attention and has gained marks in this aspect. 

Cover:3/5

Regarding this, I think the font style for dominant words can be changed as well as its color. The color with this font is not suiting well. It is designed well but I personally think that the face claim has been Jimin's instead of that girl. What I meant to say is, it is good and Jimin is present in the cover, but his picture is small and not visible like a girl. I think his face should be visible and the girl's face should be hidden. However, the cover is good and attractive enough. 

Title: ⅖

About this, I would like to say that it is not attractive enough. What I meant to say is sure, it can attract people by its name which seems bossy and gives the vibes of a forced relationship story, however, the marks I cut the marks for the un-uniqueness of the title. There are many stories having this type of title or particularly this title. So it doesn't appear as a unique one to readers. 

1st impression: ⅗

Truth to be said, I expected so much from this. And to be honest, it didn't disappoint me much. It was good enough but somehow it felt boring. The way to start a story from anyone's POV is a technique not to be looked upon. Actually,most of the people out there on wattpad didn't like the hero or heroine's POV at the very start of the story. You should use your point of view and can change it into any POV after a few sentences. However, I am still looking forward to this story and waiting as you may continue the story the way you like. But I hope you can consider this point. 

Reader's interaction: 8/10

I can see many people voting and commenting on the story. Interacting with the characters and sharing their thoughts. 

Plot: 6/10

At this point, the only marks you got is for a few elements you used in the book. Most of the stories of this type have the same cliche plot line and story execution. Where male is a bad guy or forces the female lead into marriage which also happens in this book. The only difference is that the male is not a mafia boy, the female doesn't owe him a debt to pay. But there are also a lot of stories where the female lead runs away and leaves her step sister to get married which happens in this book as well. What I meant to say is, the only elements which made me curious to know were suspense as well as a desire to know what happened and why it happened. 

I continued reading to find out the secret behind Jimin's drunken state at his own wedding. Why was the female lead blamed? Even though these questions are not big enough but for me they were, there are also a lot of little matters in this book which makes it a bit prominent among the other stories. The second thing which makes it unique is the execution of the plot. It was well settled and well explained. 

Twist: 5/10

Well, there was not much to be called a twist. Sure, there were a few elements to spice the interest of readers up but they will not be counted as twists. I am looking forward to a big and major twist in this story which I hope will be brought out soon. 

Emotions: 8/10

This is a factor I would like to talk about. You did a good job in handling them. I felt my anger boiling and sometimes little smiles. However, at some point, I didn't feel any. I hope you can make it work. 

Grammar: 7/10

You are fair enough in this sector but still you need improvement in your grammar as well as the use of phrases. You used long sentences at some points which are so long exactly. Use short sentences, little paragraphs as well as the sentence structure. Hope you can work it off. 

Character development: 8/10

It can be seen all through the story. I liked the way you told us the characters and showed us their behavior. It was no secret as to what's going on in the character's mind and what they are thinking or feeling. Good job done here. 

Writing style: 8/10

This is the thing which I liked most. You executed the plot well and told us everything in detail. You just need a gee improvement and add a few major elements in the story to make it more unique. I liked your writing style as it dealt with the characters, emotions and plot and made everything visible to us. Good job. 

Overall: 8/10

Total: 70/100

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