Reviewer: RabisRubie

Book: Fangirl

Author: AlienboyfriendTae

Blurb: ⅗

Truth to be said it is fair enough but not good enough to be called excellent. It gives off the vines of the same cliché plot of a fangirl and idol love scandal. It will look good if you add a few dialogues as well as any interesting event from the book to raise the interest of the reader. Even though it's good and gives off good and calm vines, I don't think it's enough to make a reader eager to know or read the book. 

Title: 3/5

To be honest, it didn't catch my attention. Title is one of those basic things to catch the reader's attention. However, this title made me believe that this story is of the same overused plot of a fangirl falling in love with an idol. And in the end,they will be either reunited or break away. So yeah, predicting even before starting the reading is affected by the choice of our title. But a bit of matching with the plot and story line is best. This title is best and good enough for this plot. 

Cover: ⅕

Regarding this matter, I don't think that enough work is done on this factor. The picture used for the cover is not highlighted and dark. Not much effort is being pulled on it except the font which was placed on it. It is not catchy and attractive. I would suggest you to take services from any graphic shop, if you want me to recommend then kindly pay a visit to our graphic shop which is gonna come out soon.

1st impression: ⅘

I was so glad and happy to see that my expectation was not turned down. You did a good job at maintaining the first impression of your story and spiced my interest up. Good job done here. 

Reader's interaction: 3/10

As much as this story is good and well written, I am very disappointed to see less readers and less votes and comments. This story deserves an applause and unfortunately I don't see it happening. However, let's think positive and hope for a better future. 

Plot: 9/10

At first, I thought maybe this story is the same with the same cliche plot where a fangirl meets her idol via fan meeting or via a lottery where she won a trip vacation with them. But no, this story is much different than theirs. You used such a story line and such a unique plot that it made me awestruck. I cooed and smiled throughout the story and read further. You did a very good job here.

Twist: 8/10

Plot itself is a twist. Usually,no major twists are expected in these types of stories. But you turned the whole plot in a way no one expected. Her words were really unique and even made me get carried away by the choice. I thought this story might have the same ending where either the leads are brown apart or where they are connected, but no. Your story is much more different from it. It has an open ending and the success of the female lead as a writer was a big twist in the end. 

Emotions: 8/10

You did a good job at maintaining them. I either smiled and cooed and sometimes felt anxious to know more. It was a cute journey of emotions and I felt like I could read the mind and hearts of the characters. I am impressed by it. 

Grammar: 7/10

Your story barely has mistakes for grammar, but I think it surely has a few mistakes in punctuation as well as a few mistakes in tenses. Not to mind, nobody's perfect. I hope you can work it off. 

Characters development: 9/10

Good job done here. All the characters were described well. The story was short, having only 7-8 chapters of story, but you did a good job at telling us who is who? What is their thinking? What do they want? How have they changed? You told us their inner conflicts as well. I was amazed by your skills and totally was pleased with it. 

Writing style: 8/10

As I have mentioned above, your story is quite unique and the way you depicted it,made it more beautiful. Sometimes, the cliché plot can be read and is made unique by the way the writer depicts the scene to us and makes us love whatever is happening is true. 

Sometimes, writers are not able enough to depict scenes and make even the unique plot and storyline sound as a cliché one. 

Your writing style is quite unique and all the factors discussed above made it more beautiful. 

Overall: 9/10
Total:72/100

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