Reviewer : Rabi rabisworld02

Book : Eternally ravaged

Author : _lostsoul__

Blurb: ⅖
I didn't get any excited vibes from the given description. This seems cliché and did not attract the readers. I have read the story and it is great. It has elements making it unique than others and not some heart broken breakup and makeup story. But the blurb you have chosen is not doing any justice to this story. It doesn't give us any suspenseful vibes or forces us to read more and more. 

It is simple and plain, void of any exciting and interesting element. I would suggest you use proper description of the plot you are depicting via book or add a few interesting scenes from the books which can make the reader squeal in interest to read it.

Title:3/5
First of all, I didn't know what the meaning of the title was. I had to search it up and when I found it, it was perfectly matched with the plot and storyline. It is unique and eye-catching. 

Cover: ⅘
It is beautiful. The font color, style and adjustment is good and well balanced. Text seems to appear a bit blurry to me for the word written in red. Otherwise the cover is pretty and eye-catching. 

1st impression: ⅗
At first, I was interested after seeing the cover. It caught my attention, after that title also gave me interesting vibes. But blurb made it a bit uninteresting. I thought "let's leave it, it is the same basic usual couch plot line having breakup and makeup" but then I said no, let's give this book a chance. 

I felt neutral by reading the first chapter. I meant to say, at first, it was just basic. Not very interesting but then at last when the accident was announced. I wanted to read further. 

Reader's interaction:3/5
It was there but not much. I believe readers' interaction depends on how the author deals with the readers and makes their story inquisitive. However, your story deserves much more. 

Story plot: 13/20
I was amazed by the story notes and well managed execution of the plot. At first it seemed like a cliche break up and make up story but as soon as I read that he had an accident, I  continued to read which led to a mystery and thrill. The execution of events and flow of the chapters is well balanced. 

That was clearly not an accident Jimin was victimized by. Who is he/she or they? What do they want? How would Taehyung and the girl make up for now? Why did she leave? Also, the thing is that you used an actual name instead of "Y/N" or "You" makes it much better. However a few scenes are there which are getting mixed up. You didn't quite manage the POV narration style. Which got it a bit messy.

The constant change of POV in your story was something which is not appreciated at all. This not only breaks the flow of the story but also makes the reader confused and sometimes even give up on the book. It makes a bad impression. I was unable to get who was speaking, who was sharing the ideas and thoughts. You should give us a warning or notify when you change POV. 

Twist: 8/10
It was seen. There was one major twist which came with suspense and mystery. What can I say, it was shocking to see the story turning to that genre. Which I thought only contains cliche love stories, but has amazing events and turns to give the book a 180° turn. 

Grammar: 8/10
You are pretty good with marks. No rush or reputation of words. OK, maybe there were a few times where you could have used better words. Such as "Fabulous or amazing" instead of using "very good". 
Otherwise your grammar and punctuation along with the phrasal usage is good.

Emotions: 7/10
You need improvement in this factor. I felt neutral at times. Or better say the whole time. Even though you have described the emotions, they were unable to stir the sea inside me. I would suggest you try to make the words better and use detailed descriptions for emotions. 

Character's development: 4/10
The story is still in the. egginung process, the relationship hasn't developed between leads to the point where we can say that IG will have a happy ending or not. Or will they change according to the prescription a reader has set in his mind? The story has too much to discover and I am waiting for that. 

Style:6/10
As long as your writing style is good, I think you need improvement in the "Emotions" factor in your story. Your grammar is good and character's development can be predicted. You managed the execution well and stalled the events beautifully. All the factors mentioned above put effect on the book. Hope you can work with them better. 

Overall: 8/10

Total: 68/100

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