Reviewer : Rubie RabisRubie

Book: Embrace

Author: UwUlostintaekook

Blurb: ⅘

It was cute and somehow exquisite. Even though it didn't make me curious or give me mysterious vibes,it surely gave me cute feelings and I wanted to read it. 

Cover: ⅗

In this aspect, the cover is not attractive. You can change it. The font color is good but the don't itself is not doing a good job. Even though it can be read, I personally think you should change the color as it's contrasting the background and is too bright to read without squinting your eyes. 

Title: ⅘

It is perfectly chosen and suits the plot line and story well. It is unique as well. I only cut the marks, because it is not catchy. But of course, the story has a good blurb so it automatically catches your attention. 

1st impression: ⅘

It was good. The description you gave about scene background was so good that It forced me to read further. It left a good impression,at least on me. 

Reader's interaction: 8/10

You have readers who are enjoying your story as well as getting along with characters and reacting in the way they should. 

Plot: 8/10

It was somehow unique. I have read many stories like this and plots with the same theme and storyline. But no one impressed 

In the way you did. Either they all were too cliche or cringey to continue reading. But your story seems realistic and has a good management of scenes and events. Good job. 

Twist: 7/10

This book is weak in this factor. Maybe because it's still ongoing. It has not shown me any major twist till now, this story surely has a twist but what can I say, they are minor one. Not the ones who make everyone shocked. Let's wait and see what happens next. 

Emotions: 7/10

You are nice with them but I personally think you can do better than this. You should show their inner conflict as well. Which is not seen in the story. 

Grammar: 7/10

Your grammar is fair but you need improvement in this factor. Your grip is loose on punctuation as well as some tenses. In the same sentence,you have used two tenses which are irrelevant. Like, in some sentences which have 2 tenses, you have to follow certain rules and use specific tenses, but you haven't used them.

Character development: 8/10

As much as the story has come forward, the pace of character development is slow but it manages to keep showing as the story goes further. Good job. 

Writing style: 9/10

This is something I would like to talk about. Your writing style is so good, especially how you depict the background story. The explanation of a scene is so good. The writers with this style of explanation and their way of writing are rare. And also the slow pace of character development brings slow burn. It made me feel good. You just need a bit of improvement.

Good job. 

Overall: 7/10

Total: 78/100

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