Reviewer: A_Tiger_Lily

Book: Corpse bride

Author: Coraline005

Blurb: 4/5

It was catchy and good. But it didn't give a description of the book. It's a paranormal book, and it is shown in the way you gave the blurb. But still you can add a few dialogues or some scenes.

Cover: 3/5

It is good but the font/text must be changed. It is getting mixed up with the background. Maybe you can change the font style, like majestic bold.

Title: 5/5

The title is unique and matches the story. But I still think you can change it. Only if you want, otherwise, it is good and catchy.

First impression: 4/5

It was really amazing. I had been feeling anxious and eager to know more.

Reader's interaction: 9/10

I have seen people wanting to read further and further. I,myself, am interested to know more.

Plot: 9/10

It's unique and has very interesting elements to spike up the interest. However, what I feel a little bit down about is your plot is good but you need to jolly it up a little. It feels tight but really good.

Twist: 8/10

It has a major twist in it. I couldn't predict that Jimin's father will decide to sacrifice his own son, just to gain popularity. How that bride is still here.

Grammar: 8/10

Your grammar is really good but only a few mistakes could be seen.

Emotions: 9/10

You focused on them well. Described them really well but I felt so.eating off. Like you should give the description of the background scene too. Otherwise it's good.

Character: 8/10

They are described and discussed briefly. Only one thing I want to point out is, you can make them a little flexible. This story can make readers anxious and depressed but I think..... A little bit of fun can happen. Like telling good or some fun activities that happened in Jimin's parent's early married life. Or some fun moments of jimin... Like... If it's possible.

Writing: 7/10

It's good. You only need to improve your writing style a bit by using some fun elements. However, it's good.

Over all: 9/10

Total: 83/100

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