Reviewer: Rubie RabisRubie

Book: Broken strings

Author: ggukkiesbear

Blurb: ⅘

It's good and nice. However, I personally think you should cut the line "Ongoing/ date" from the start and write it at the bottom of the blurb. It will be good. As it is coming in negative points. But mainly, it made me excited and the dialogue you wrote was really good. 

Cover: ⅗

Even though the theme is dark I think, you should add a few more elements in it. Like magical strings… It's only my suggestion. But your cover is good. But one thing is affecting its beauty and that's the W logo of wattpad on the top. It would look good if you consider my suggestions. Otherwise it's pretty. It's eye-catching.

Title: ⅘

The title is something I would love to talk about. It's perfectly chosen, according to the plot and storyline, it suits the book well. It is eye-catching as well as unique. 

First impression: ⅘

Truth to be said,my first impression of this book was good. I could feel the emotions bubbling inside me at the very start as well as the curiosity to know what led the male lead crying this bad and hurt this much. It was nice and I wanted to read more. 

Reader's interaction: 6/10

Even though the story didn't have any ugh readers, what I meant to say is many readers but still the readers who are there like me, are communicating with the story well. This communication involves the reader feeling attached to the character and feeling the emotions of them. I felt this interaction between me and this book. 

Plot: 7/10

This plotline is not rare. Every mafia book has this type of plot where one left other for another one but it was all because the later was forced to do it or… Something like that. But one thing is clear here, this author had made this plot unique by using such elements like urgency, using detailed description describing emotions and scenes, this all had made this book a good one. It is balanced but I think the antagonist is over cruel… I know he is the villain of this book but the 2nd main lead is suffering so much, hope you can make it happy for him for the pain he suffered. 

Twist: 4/10

This story has only 6 chapters excluding the prologue. I haven't seen any twist yet, therefore I can't say anything regarding this factor. Even though I am excited for our heroes to meet each other, I am waiting for the biggest twist here to know what led to them to be apart. 

Emotions: 9/10

Oh girl, claps for you. You portrayed each and every emotion in a way that I could feel pain and the suffering of characters. I could see how much effort you have put in depicting them. Well done.

Grammar: 8/10

You are very good with grammar and also have a dorm grip on your words. Good job here. 

Character development: 6/10

As I said before, this story barely has 6 chapters. Therefore I can't know if there would be any development or change in the behavior of the characters. I gave marks only for the description of characters which were portrayed beautifully. You showed their inner feelings, fears and courage. That was a good move. 

Writing: 9/10

Your writing is good and you have the potential to be known as the writer. I am looking forward to your success. All the factors mentioned above affect the story and make it cliche or good. Your writing style is unique and that's what makes a cliche plot even more beautiful and readable. 

Overall: 8/10

Total: 72/100

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