Reviewer: SeokJins_Yeonin_rh

Book: Be With You (BTS V) [ON HOLD]

Author: SL-BTSILLION

Description: 4/5

It is too long but it consists of different descriptions so it makes it intriguing to read. I like it, it's attractive. 

Cover: 3.5/5 

It's really simple and plain. Because you used an attractive picture of Taehyung, it looks like a nice cover but honestly it is really simple. Maybe try a different font and use a darker theme as this plot is dark romance. 

Title: 4/5

It does match the plot slightly as I can guess that Celeste wants to be with Taehyung through Jungkook. So, reading the Blurb and title, I could decipher that much only and not the fact that the female character was so…diverse. 

First Impression: 3.5/5

Honestly, it didn't impress me much. It was like 'Another Taehyung book, no big deal', even after reading the Blurb but as I went deeper, I started liking this book. 

Readers Interaction: 9/10

Your book needs more exposure and when it does, get ready to see a ton of messages in your notifications. 

Story Plot: 9/10

It is intriguing, a dark romance is appreciated. 

Plot Twist: 6/10 

You already expose her plans in the chapters so it's difficult to think of any twists when everything is so obvious but then again, as it is still ongoing, I would be expecting nice, unexpected twists. 

Grammar: 8/10

Do not use Korean words in English writing. Then the tense was changed in the firstmost chapter, "forget" should have been "forgot" and then capitalization of "S" in soon and there should have been a question mark after "soon". 

You are supposed to use commas like this:

"I love Jin", She said. (The comma can be inside as well as there are two curriculums that people follow) 

And full-stop like this: 

"I love Jin." She turned around to face the red-haired woman. 

Also don't use informal words like "don't", etc. in narration, only use it in dialogues. Here, in this sentence '"Damn, who is she, tell me? Do I know her?" Sharkey asked one question after another.' this punctuation is kinda wrong and it can be written in a better way, it should be '"Damn, who is she? Do I know her? What does she look like?" Sharley bombarded him with her curious questions.' It sounds better than the previous one. Also avoid saying 'Okayyyy' instead of 'Okay'. Use an exclamation mark if this tone is exciting. 

Emotions and Feels: 9.5/10

The taste of anticipation is sweet in this book. I love it, I like it a lot. 

Character Development: 8.5/10 

As this is still ongoing, I have yet to see them developed but the characters are good. 

Way of Writing: 10/10

It is really catchy and makes you wanna continue reading it, non-stop aka it doesn't make you lose interest at all. 

Overall: 10/10 

I really enjoyed reading this book. It's really good and the characters are good as well. Keep it up. 

Total: 85/100

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