- Accursed ‗ ❍

Reviewer: A_Tiger_Lily

Author: apoeticbee

Book: Accursed

Title: 4/5
Even though accursed is the synonym of cursed, a common reader who doesn't know this has to search up the meaning first. However the title truly matches the story. 

Cover: 3/5
It is good and really matches the theme plot,but I would recommend you to change the text style as well as color. White one is fading with the background. Rest is good.

Blurb: 5/5
It is good and eye-catching. Really feels emotions via it and gives a suspense to know what has happened in the book. 

First impression: 3/5
However, at first I was confused. Maybe it was only me but I had to read the first chapter 3 times to understand it better. However as I got further in, it made me addicted. 

Reader's interaction: 9/10
The eagerness of readers truly shows how much this story is wanted and has the reader attracted to it. 

Story plot: 8/10
It was unique and beautiful. But one thing I would like to point out is you made the present and past in one chapter but without any header and divider. Even though you used italics in the past, it would've been easier for readers if you put a divider. 

Twist: 9/10
It was unexpected but the story turned into something I never could predict. Really good and well explained. 

Grammar: 8/10
It was good but still there were many grammar mistakes both grammatically and punctuation. 

Emotions: 7/10
Sometimes, it's well explained and sometimes it feels off. Rest is good.

Character: 8/10
They are well described and show their personality through words and actions. Well done. 

Writing: 7/10
Same goes for this. Even though your style is good and unique, I cut marks for the confusing part. Where you mingled the past with the future.

Overall: 8/10
Really good story, looking forward for new updates. 

Total: 82/100

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