Reviewer: Rubie RabisRubie

Book: A love too far

Author: blinky_army4ever

Blurb: 4/5

It was so good and immediately caught my attention. This is my first time reading something like this and blurb made me curious to know what is hidden. 

Cover: 2/5

Unfortunately, the cover is not good. It doesn't seem that enough work is being done on it. It is so simple and plain despite having the well written book under it. The font is not good as well as it is not catchy.  The elements like timeline themes and novel themes will look good. You can add BTS as a face claim but let the theme set in first. 

Title: 3/5

The title is good and well chosen. It matches with the theme as well as the storyline and plot. But most of the people don't like just plain titles. You can add modern and unique text style as well as the main lead name in it to make it more catchy. The cover should do a good job in displaying the title. 

First impression: 3/5

First impression was good. You didn't disappoint me after making me curious to know more about the story line. However, I bought him marks because I didn't feel any pull in characters. What I meant to say is… I don't feel interested in knowing the female lead. The starting was simple yet good but you should put some more interesting elements to make it more appealing. Like the little explained lifestyle of the girl. 

Reader's interaction: 5/10

This book has fewer readers than it deserves. However, the people reading this are connecting with this and waiting for the next update. 

Plot: 9/10

Truth to be said, I haven't seen or read this type of plot before. Sure, I have seen a few dramas on this theme but writing it in words is much more difficult than depicting it in graphics. All the scenes must be well placed and the characters behave according to that, it's very difficult to manage these types of plots. But you did a good job and pulled this plot off with  good measure. Well done. 

Twist: 7/10

As much as I was expecting to see some major twists I couldn't see them. Except a few, little twists, there is not any big or major twist seen about which we can say that it turned the story into a different direction. Maybe the major and the bigger twist still has to come as the story is in mid way and still ongoing. I am waiting. 

Emotions: 6/10

As much as your storyline and plot impressed me, you are weak in this factor. I didn't feel any emotion while reading any scene. No fear, no tears, no smiles… It was plain. I personally think you should work on this. Doing a monologue means talking to yourself. Become Jimin for a while and say his dialogues and out yourself in his shoes to feel what would you have done if you were at his place. 

Grammar: 8/10

Your grammar is good and vocabulary is simple. No difficult words or too deep words are used. You kept it simple and unique and it's a good factor to be counted upon. 

Character development: 8/10

You are also good at this. You depict them well as well as make sure to show their behavior and their development throughout the story. Well done. 

Writing style: 7/10

Regarding this matter, I would say that you need a little improvement in this section. You should use words and depiction skills while mentioning characters as well as the background and surroundings. You should use words first then use pictures to make it more clear. 

Over all: 7/10

Total: 70/100

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