Reviewer: Lily A_Tiger_Lily

Author: Littney

Book: A little slice of heaven

Blurb: 4/5

It's quite interesting and beautiful. The way you gave us all a glimpse of an unexpected honeymoon was amazing. But you didn't give a gap in your paragraphs. I would recommend you to do that. 

Cover: 3/5

It's too simple as well as the font is also light. I mean it would be good if you add a namjoon photo as background as it is a namjoon story. If not, then you should use a better don't as well as better color to be visible on the cover. 

Title: 5/5

I never heard of a book having this title. It's good as it is unique as well as it perfectly matches the story line. As how at first the main lead was trapped and felt lonely and how unexpectedly he met another and felt blossom in his life. It perfectly suits the story line. 

First impression: 4/5

At first I thought, this story will be like others where the main lead will be cheated upon by his husband and then move on while still being on a trip. But then I started to read it and it was amazing. I wanted to read more and more and wanted to know what would happen next. 

Reader's interaction: 9/10

The readers are really enjoying this story as well as getting themselves immersed in the story line. Commenting their thoughts on each chapter and waiting for the next. (Just like me)

Plot: 8/10

It's not always when you will find someone having a honeymoon after 5 years of marriage and also finding true love on this supposed to be called honeymoon. I expected it to turn into one of  cliché plots where either the man is cheating or being cheated on. Or his own partner realizing his mistake. No….. It was unique. And well placed events and sequences of them made it stand unique. 

Twist: 7/10

As much as it was unique, this story only has a few twists. One of them being celebrating his honeymoon without his husband. Or finding his true love there. But it felt good. The flow and less twist which is often some cheating stuff in most of these plots, suits well. Good job. 

Grammar: 7/10

You sometimes made mistakes, such as punctuation as well as some tenses mistakes, the rest was good. 

Emotions: 8/10

Good job. Oh how badly,I wanted to jump in and take the joonie away from this hell, and hide him in my arms as well as punch his husband hard in the face. But I knew our hero would come so I stopped myself from jumping in. (Phew). It's really good. I could feel emotions bubbling inside of me. 

Character's development: 8/10

I loved how Seokjin was able to tell Namjoon to stand for himself and let go of the other. It could be seen in the whole story and plot. Characters were not left, not the flow as how to make them relapse and stand unique was broken. Good job. 

Writing style: 9/10

So let's talk about this. As I have said earlier, you depicted the scenes well as well as you made your story alive by putting sincere emotions in them. I love how the conversation between the second lead couple took turns and added humor in chat other than angst. 

Overall: 8/10

Total: 80/100

 
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