Reviewer : Rabi  rabisworld02

Book : A beautiful Accident

Author : Kim_eats

Blurb: ⅕
To be honest, blhrn was not catchy. It doesn't attract me or give me any excited vibes. It was simple and plain without any hint about plot, characters and storyline. Blurb is one of those main 3 factors which attracts the most of the readers. Basically blurb is the one which attracts more attention even then the other two. But the blurb you chose for this book didn't give me any reason to continue the book. 

You should change it as I suggest you add a few dialogues of characters, but some interesting ones not plain and boring. After that, it's your choice to describe a scene from the story or not. But I would suggest you do as it makes the blurb catchy and interesting. Any interesting scene or events from your book will do the Job. 

After adding these two things, you can either do it or not. Add a little description of your plot. What I meant to say is to give us a few hints regarding your plot, story and its genres. It plays an important role in attracting the readers and alike their interest. 

Title: ⅗
It was neither plain or blunt nor was it unique. I have seen many books with the same title. But I think for this book, its storyline and plot. This title does justice to it. This phrase is beautiful and chosen perfectly according to the theme and the story line. It gave me neutral vibes. I wanted to read the story only because its title was beautiful and attracted me. Blurb and cover didn't do their job well. 

Cover: ⅕
It is not eye-catching, not even a little bit. It doesn't attract the reader as it should have. The reason is simple. It is plain and boring. I don't think it is fair enough to the beautiful storyline you have picked. I didn't see any of its relevance to the story. It was a picture with the simplest text possible. Cover is one of those factors which catches readers and excites them. The interest builds in readers if the cover is catchy and attractive, gives off excited vibes, gives us hints about genres and story lines. 

Yoongi's picture is Grey along with the background and text. They are all mingling together. But the rainbow hair color on Yoongi is not doing a good job. It should have been simple in grey or black just like the rest of the cover. The not so perfect blend of colors is making the picture bad and doesn't cooperate in making it catchy. 

Text color and fine style can be better and make it a little small.Basically you should change the whole cover. There is no creativity level as it is zero. I would suggest you take services from a graphic shop. Our community also has a graphic shop. I hope you can find some amazing graphics for your book.

Reader's interaction: 5/5
I think it depends on the author,their depiction skill and writing style. These things make a reader to share their thoughts and itch them to write what they want or think of a character and storyline.
You did a good job here. Readers are interacting well and are doing a good job.

Plot: 13/15
The plot is good. I have to admit that you executed it well. All the scenes, events and commotions are well balanced and executed properly. The scenes are described in detail and events are discussed briefly. About the story line, I must say it is unique. The female protagonist is a strong one, not a usual weak and cry baby. The male protagonist is beautifully described and explained as well. At some points it gave me the most romantic vibes ever while in some.places it gave me the vibes of a political drama. 

This is the unique thing about it, because you can't predict what is going to happen and how the scene is going to end. This story line gives you mixed feelings and vibes of mixed genres. I liked your style and loved the plot. 

Twist: 7/10
Yes, there are a lot. Not major ones but there are the events whose ending can't be predicted. The conflicts and differences between the characters and the reasoning behind their actions are not to be predicted unless the author herself doesn't reveal. The plot is intense and gives off exciting vibes. Just like the latest update, readers are eagerly waiting to know what will happen next. 

Grammar: 7/10
Basically, grammar has two parts. One of them is the use of prepositions and punctuations as well the parts of speech. While the other part counts tense usage, sentence structure and phrasal usage.
You are pretty good with tense usage but the phrasal and parts of speech such as correct usage of prepositions is not quite good. You don't have plenty of mistakes but still there are a few obvious errors. 

Even though these mistakes don't affect common readers except they have the sense of prepositions and the or correct usage. Let's take an example below: 

"Seheen sipped on her coffee" Now this sentence is taken from your book. According to the rule,this should be like "Seheen sipped her coffee" . There wouldn't be any use of the word "on" as it is wrong per rule. Same mistakes are seen on multiple occasions. The repetition of phrases are also located. 

Hope you can edit them. 

Emotions: 7/10
I think you balanced it equally. But at the same point there are unbalanced points as well. What I meant to say is, Emotions were unbalanced at some points. Emotions are the ones which tell us the character's development and notify us about their characters. Emotions are the ones which force us to continue reading as they are a means to interact with characters. Your story has emotions but in some scenes you focused mainly on description of scene or background and the dialogues. At some point, I was overwhelmed with the emotions you portrayed and at some points it felt neutral. Hope you can balance it.

Character's development: 8/10
Of course, there was an obvious change in the behaviors of characters. The reasons behind the I each and every action was justified and their characters have valid reasons behind each of their actions. The development was obvious as their way of behavior changed, either negatively or positively. 

Writing style: 8/10
Your writing style is pretty good. You executed the plot well and described each and everything in detail. Explaining characters deeply, showing us their inner conflicts and behavior's development. It all made this book a beautiful one but the unbalanced emotions,a few preposition mistakes, phrasal errors affected your writing style. Hope you can work on these mistakes and improve. 

Overall: 7/10
Total: 69/100 

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