Coraline005

- Reviewer Nana -

Book cover :: 9/10

The cover is serene, eye-catching and beautiful, though...I'll suggest adjusting the texts. Like, adding "A Kim Seokjin Short Story" at the bottom of the cover.

Title :: 8/10
The meaning and usage of the word is perfectly done; it's relevant to the story and shares a good connection, though...I would suggest adding more to it like "Life of a peony" or "Peony femina"

Description :: 10/15

The description is not that engrossing and the writing style is not the best. I'll suggest you to add something that describes the plot whilst riveting the readers, and for the writing style, I would suggest not to make really short sentences, rather...use commas or ellipses and continue.

Storyline :: 10/20

The plot has used a trope but is missing some descriptions, like they were supposed to be enemies, but when they met, it didn't seem like it. Also, the majority of the storyline was cliche, I was able to guess the whole story so I would suggest you to add twists and turns in between, otherwise, it'll look really bland and try to take it slow in order to show how they slowly started initiating again.

Characters :: 5/10

The characters lagged feature and life description, you could have used more chapters showing their usual life and features. The developments were quite fast and not that vast, you could go a bit slow and add more scenarios.

Dialogue delivery ::14/15

The dialogues were substantial and expressed well, but the spaces were unnecessary.

Grammar & vocabulary :: 10/20

-Too many uses of periods(.) for instance:: Hobi listened to him with his eyes down.His finals were almost round the corner. Here, you could have used ellipsis or comma instead.-Error whilst using ellipses, for instance:: "Hobi ..... I need you to pass this exam . Don't disappoint me this time." There should've been three periods instead of 5.-Gaps, for instance:: This time , they are required to untie enemies. The gap before and after the comma was unnecessary, they can disturb the flow of reading so, I would suggest you to eschew that.

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