mistopher

- Reviewer Max -

"Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counsellors, and the most patient of teachers."

— Charles William Elliot.

  Cover: 5/10

→ It looked cool the first time I saw it, but after viewing it again, it became strange to look at. Maybe it's because of the Wattpad sign, or maybe it's because the photo looks odd.

Title 2/5

→ Despite the fact that it is appropriate for the title, the title is overused. I feel you are capable of coming up with a more original and imaginative title.

Blurb: 7/10

→ I must admit, the phrasing is great. Perhaps you could add additional length and detail to the blurb while also disclosing a little something about the book.

Plot And Twists: 24.5/25

→ The plot is quite original and has a pleasant flavor. This is a brief but excellent book. This was a fantastic book for me. The sensitive subject was handled nicely, and I enjoyed it. I'll be honest, I didn't see the twist at the end coming. I was anticipating them to have this conclusion where they get married but still live on with the memories of the lovers when I first read through, but it blew my mind when I read the finish; I'm curious how you came up with such a storyline. This is incredibly underappreciated, and I'm blown away. It leaves you with a question though. Why was Namjoon driving a truck? But in some way, it would have ruined the flow of your book. Maybe do an extra chapter explaining this independent of your story.

Characters and Emotions: 9/10

→ I'd be lying if I said I wouldn't do that if I were the female protagonist. It would have been too much trauma for me not to consider murdering the male protagonist. The desire to kill him without a plan and go to jail would have possessed me. The writing elicits strong emotions in readers, and I adore the whole thing.

Writing Style: 13/15

→ The writing style is well-done, and I enjoy it, but there is something weirdly off about it that I can't put my finger on. Maybe it's because I don't see books like this too often that it's confusing me. It's almost like if you're reading a diary, you know how it is. It's like if I'm reading someone's diary, and I'm watching the journal go from total hatred to pure humane care. I must admit that the book rendered me dumbfounded.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 9/10

→ The vocabulary is fairly extensive and includes a number of sophisticated words. However, you should tidy up your grammar a little bit; don't change much, just the punctuation.

Reviewer's thoughts: 5/5

→ This is a book I believe I will return to when I need to cry about something. This is my kind of book, and seeing tear-jerking content that is also highly engaging is quite rare, so kudos to you for pulling it off. The death of a loved one is a delicate subject, and I appreciate how nicely you handled it. This will undoubtedly be added to my reading list. When I was reading through the book, It is no surprise I cried a lot. Seeing two broken people connect together was the most wholesome thing to see but then it got real dark.

TOTAL: 74.5/100

Strengths and Weaknesses: → I loved the whole book but the title needs to be worked on and the grammar touch up, that's it.

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