fluffy_dandruff

- Reviewer Bun -

Cover :: 8/10
The cover is quite pretty and its black and shady vibes get along with the suspense kept in the book and the hints of a terrifying past. The font placement and selection is fine too.
Unfortunately, the title and the cover are quite contrasting since the relation mentioned in the title and the one displayed seem contradictory. Though it might not be much of an issue, it seems oddly mismatched at the first glance.

Title :: 4/5
The title is relevant to the book, and it oddly gives the vibes of a novel more than a fanfiction. It's actually pretty and attractive too.
But somewhere, I found it slightly putting off since the story started with Nina's present rather than her past, which, though, is just as mysterious.
I'd still not suggest you change the title, since it simply adds to the mystery of the book and her past.

Blurb :: 8/10
It's simple and informative enough. I'd credit the blurb for anticipating suspense within the reader. It's written really well and actually made me expect good grammar and vocabulary inside the book.
The only flaw were a few comma splices which resulted in the deduction of marks.

Plots and Twists :: 21/25
The plot is seriously amazing. I love the way everything fits almost perfectly and the story flows smoothly.
It's also exciting to read through the nightmares knowing it's something regarding her past. The nightmares as such have been quite subtle and indirect, yet they are hinting in the right direction.
The only flaw I found in this was the way the idols and the tattoo artist became good friends. It was rather sudden and quite easy, considering the youngest had been caught in a huge scandal regarding another tattoo artist who was assumed to be his girlfriend too. It would've been just as justified if things didn't go so easily and so casually.

Characters and Emotions :: 7/10
The characters are portrayed quite well. Their actions, though suiting their nature, don't suit their profession. But again, the boy band is like that, so no comments. I liked the way you were able to capture their characters and traits so well.
I think you could've done a better job on the emotions. Maybe try adding a better description of what the characters actually feel. Except for Nina, the other characters' emotions aren't really shown.

Writing style :: 12/15
The writing style is quite descriptive. It played a huge role in maintaining the suspense. The credits to the nice portrayal of the characters absolutely goes to the writing style. It just adds to the beauty of the plot, and I don't think you need any changes in it.
Please focus on adding some emotions to the story. Maybe trying to concentrate just as much on the description of sentiments will help.

Grammar and Vocabulary :: 17/20
The vocabulary is quite cool. I think it could've been better, but the current choice of words is just as satisfactory and is giving nice results. It's honestly up to you to use more sophisticated words or go with the ones you're using; both of them would do.
The grammar is quite good except for a few errors which could be mostly due to lack of editing. Just skim through the chapters once again and you're good to go.

Reviewer's Thoughts :: 4/5
I like the book. It's actually creative... and quite original. Quite nice to read. I actually liked Nina's character a lot, and the maknae line is fun to watch too. It's developing quite well, as of now. I hope it continues that way...
I really wish the book gains enough attention- let's go on the coke ride if it does!

Total :: 81/100

Strengths and Weaknesses ::
Your strengths would be the vivid imagination and good creativity. You also have a nice and unique writing style which is descriptive and makes the book interesting to read.
Your weakness is just that you've not really focused on describing the emotions of the other characters present inside the book. I suggest adding some more feelings to it, and it'll be amazing.

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