Genius_MinSwag

-Reviewer Nana-

Book Cover: 3/10

The cover is not balanced properly. The faces are not matching and are not in the same size, I'll suggest adding something that blends in well and looks interesting. The title font is more towards the left which makes it look nothing but blunt. The user tag could have been smaller in size and elements could have been added to make it look more relevant.

Title: 2/10

The title was relevant to the story but lacked originality and creativity. Its a very simple word that described the action but could have been turned into something more. Like, 'Forced to Love'

Description: 7/15

The description could have been better and executed in a different way. There were some mistakes in tense like 'loved' with 'didn't' and ellipsis, 'yet..'
I would suggest on adding a scene or a short intense summary, that doesn't expose the whole plot, in your description.

Storyline: 5/20

The story was obvious all along except for some twists that I didn't think of but later guessed it. You could have made some changes from the start to keep the readers hooked. The plot is a bit common so some might lose interest. Some suspense and proper cliffhangers are needed and so is the overall execution. Also, the part where the protagonist was forced sexually, it didn't really blend in with the love side. I think it needed some more information from the start for a better connection and understanding.

Characters: 3/10

Proper description of their features and personality were not added, although there were parts where some of it was mentioned. The story revolved around the plot from the start and I think that was not necessary. You could have shown how they usually live their life or give a glimpse of it since when the female protagonist got a call from her boss, I got confused...I thought she was a house wife.

Dialogue Delivery: 13/15

The punctuation were good in the dialogues and they were expressed well. However, there were a few  mistakes that I spotted like the ellipsis and excessive use of period. Try saying the lines you write to figure out how long it should be and where can you punctuate it. Ellipsis to remind you is a line of 3 periods (...) so be careful when you use it.

Grammar: 13/20

1. Punctuation- Like I said in the above aspects, there were quite a number of them but it can be fixed if you practice writing everyday.

2.Syntax- You need to look at for the continuity of the sentences because the excessive periods or any other punctuation mark might break the flow of a reader.

3. Vocabulary- The words were mostly simple, there were times where you could change the words like "unveiling" instead of "revealing".

4.Tense- This one needs some attention, there were quite a lot of mistake in tense. One example can be "Yah, I want to sleep since I am tired." Here, everything was supposed to be in past participle but it suddenly changed to present continuous.

5. Missing words- At times, the sentence didn't have proper information like "It has been a few days since we came back from our so called 'honeymoon'." Came back where? There is no information on that.

6. Actions- If you are mentioning an action, then refrain from using '*' around it. You can either mention it later or use it without the punctuation.

Total: 46/100

Strength- I didn't really see a proper strength but the one you are better in than others is dialogue delivery.

Weakness- Almost all the aspects. Don't it take it as a discouraging message, but rather take it as a goal to improve and do better.

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