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Cover :: 8/10
The cover is minimalistic and to the point. The brain graphic used in the cover portrays the title very well. The font used is also catchy and attractive. I would suggest adding some dialogue or a quote mayhaps from the story as the subtitle; but it's nice nevertheless.

Title :: 4/5
The title is unique and catchy. As a reader, it did spark some curiosity and questions upon reading the title. The relevancy of a title is also important and this one is perfect for the story.

Blurb :: 9/10
The blurb was very well written and there are hardly any mistakes. the way you have created an ambience of interaction in the blurb is really appreciative. Though I would recommend making the sentences a bit shorter or add commas between them to make it easier for a majority of readers. And congratulations on featuring on wattpad's reading lists!

Plot and Twists :: 24/25
The plot is a very unique one, something I've never actually read. The pace of the story is also very relaxing, neither too slow nor too fast, just perfect. I won't say that the story line didn't make sense, it's just that to understand it better, one has to keep on reading further, which, I feel, is a nice technique to keep your readers busy and not make them bored. As a reader, I could feel the involuntary urge to go on reading and find out what happens. So, that's a plus point.
The characters have been introduced rather uniquely, I must say. Towards the beginning, the introduction of Beth and her mother were fun to read through! In fact, all the characters have been entertainingly introduced to the audience.

Characters and Emotions :: 9/10
The characters have been portrayed nicely as well. Their characteristics and personality was quite well-defined. It's not always necessary for you to describe a character in one definite paragraph, actually it depends on your writing style and your way of describing the characters matches the writing style you have adopted, that is to provide little information in the right opportunities.
Being able to depict a specific emotion through your writing is a really impressive quality for a writer and you have done really well in that field. I, as a reader, could actually relate to those emotions, which is a kudos for you!

Writing Style :: 14/15
Your writing style is very impressive. The details you have put into the descriptions makes it quite easy for readers to imagine a specific set up or an episode. Your usage of words is also very appreciative, as the sentence structure is easy to comprehend mixed with the correct usage of words. The two go very well!

Grammar and Vocabulary :: 17.5/20
Your grammar is also something that needs appreciation. I haven't spotted any major mistakes in the story. However, I did spot a few typo errors and spelling mistakes, which you should go through and edit.
Your choice of words were also impressive. Despite them being fancy and heavy, they were easily comprehensible.

Reviewer's Thoughts :: 5/5
I really liked the story. The writing style, the plot, and the characters were all very likable and impressive! And yes, I have identified some of the characters, like that of Aarav Hooda and Han Minji. All in all, I'm really glad I was able to review this book :D

Total :: 90.5/100

Strengths and Weaknesses ::
I have not noticed any weakness of yours because from your writing style to management of the pace of the story, everything was immaculate.
Your strengths, I would like to point out, were your describing skills and vocabulary. Your choice of characters were also really nice. Overall, I loved your story, keep it up!

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