Taes_potathoe

- Reviewer Koo -

BOOK COVER: 9/10

The book cover was well edited and the font was visible too.

TITLE: 8/10

I am not yet sure if the title matches the story or not, because the story has not commenced further. And it's not very eye-catching. But I won't say it's very common, because it isn't.

DESCRIPTION: 14/15

The description was well-written and there weren't many mistakes. It wasn't too revealing either and just the right amount of necessary information has been given.

STORY LINE: 14/20

The story has commenced well till chapter three and it was pretty well-written. But I do feel that you probably missed chapter 4 and 5 and went directly to chapter 6. It confused me for a minute before I realized that some parts were missing. So make sure to correct that. Otherwise, I like how the story has begun and how it has been going.

CHARACTERS: 8/10

There hasn't been much character development or maybe because it's just the beginning. But your portrayal of characters is prettier than many other authors. You can be more descriptive about their features to create a vivid imagination in the reader's mind. I am a BTS stan, so I know whom you're talking about but someone who's not might have a tiny bit of problem. But you have done a good job till then.

DIALOGUE DELIVERY: 14/15

The dialogues are well-conveyed and realistic. Not many errors were there. The dialogues speak a lot about the character too and you have done a fair job at that.

GRAMMAR & VOCAB: 18/20

There weren't many grammatical errors. But the vocabulary can be improved further and it's usage too.

WEAKNESS AND STRENGTH: Your writing is really good, for the level of a beginner. If you can improvise your vocabulary and take your writing style to a further unique level, then I'm pretty sure you'd be a great writer.

TOTAL: 85/100

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