Reviewer fake name - Blaire ( anonymous)

Title of the story -  The five cursed witches : ( Volume 1) Zoe, the witch of innocence. 

Author - High_Priestess_Elena

Review - :

1) Title - :: 3/5
I think the title  is quite nice and simple. It definitely gives a hint about the story and sets the stage for an exciting adventure. But  it is a bit long. Also I think there's still some room for improvement. I believe you can make it even more captivating and engaging with a little more work.
2) Cover -::  3/5
The cover is nice and romantic, but it doesn't quite capture the magical and fictional elements of your story. It's important to strike a balance and give readers a glimpse of both genres. I think with a little more creativity, you can create a cover that beautifully represents the magical and romantic aspects of your story. 
3) Description/prologue -:: 3/5
The description is nice and provides a good amount of detail about the story. It gives readers a glimpse into what they can expect and creates intrigue.However, there are some sentences that are correct but confusing to read. I believe there is room for improvement to enhance the overall description ( basically the English and sentences). 
4) First Chapter -:: 4/5
The first chapter is really nice, beautifully carried, and the ending is just perfect. It left me wanting to read more, and I was truly intrigued. I liked  the captivating storytelling.
5) Character development -:: 9/10
The characters in the book are incredibly well-written. As you read, you can really get a sense of who they are, and the more you delve into the story, the more you learn about them. Having a dual point of view adds an extra layer of depth to the main characters, allowing us to understand their perspectives and motivations. And I absolutely love how the book provides nice details about the side characters too, like the piestress, Alex, the librarian, and Scarlet. It's these little details that make the story come alive and create a rich and immersive reading experience. 
6) Plot -:: 8/10
The plot of the story is indeed unique and captivating. While there may be some cliche elements like the "mate" concept, the overall incorporation of magical elements and the way the story flows really keeps you hooked. The combination of magical elements and romance adds an extra layer of excitement and intrigue. 
7) Writting style -:: 11/15
The English used in the story is simple and easy to understand, which is great for a general audience. It's important to make sure the language is accessible to all readers. However, I understand that there are a few grammatical errors and confusing sentences that could use improvement. Punctuation plays a crucial role in clarifying the meaning of a sentence, and it's important to ensure that it is used effectively. For example, in the sentence you mentioned, "The wine she was drinking was the same brand as she had last time she was here as well," there is definitely room for improvement to make it clearer and more concise. It's always beneficial to have a good proofreading process in place to catch these errors and make necessary revisions. With some polishing, the story will shine even brighter! 
8) Dialogue - 9/10
The dialogues in the story are simple and good, which makes them easy to follow and understand. It's always important to keep the conversations between characters natural. Simple dialogues can often be more effective in conveying emotions and moving the story forward.
9) Setting -:: 8/10
Like the other elements the setting of the story is simple yet beautifully explained. While it may not provide intricate details, it still manages to give you a clear idea and picture of the world you're reading about.
10) Emotional Impact -:: 8/10
The emotional impact of the story is indeed beautiful. You can't help but feel a deep sense of empathy for the character and her inability to experience touch due to the curse. The way she longs for her mate and mother, and the range of emotions she goes through like anger, sorrow, and even hatred, are all portrayed in such a captivating way. ! The emotional depth of the story allows us to not only feel for the main character but also to connect with the emotional journey of the other main character.
11 Reviewers opinion -:: 11/15
In my opinion, the book is really great and worth reading. I enjoyed reading it, although there are areas ( mentioned above ) that could be improved to ehance the overall quality of the book.

Total -:: 77 / 100

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