1)  𝐌𝐑. 𝐃𝐄𝐌𝐎𝐍 (Judged by @Winkwink07)

TITLE: 6/10

BOOK COVER: 5/10

DESCRIPTION: 12/20

It was simple but could have been more attractive

GRAMMAR: 8/10

VOCABULARY: 5/10

Vocabulary is good and simple but considering it in a story it could have been better

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10

It was attractive

PLOT:15/20

It was very good

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10

It was well-written

TOTAL: 67/100

2) 𝐒𝐄𝐂𝐑𝐄𝐓𝐒  (Judged by @dynamjoonics_)

Title: 5/10 - there are many other books with the same title which doesn't make it stand out much.

Cover: 8/10 - I love the cover since it introduces the main characters.

Description: 18/20 - interesting description since the mini dialogue intrigued me so much. Well written.

Grammar: 7/10 - could work on the grammar since there are a few mistakes and the thing not seeing full stops at the end of certain sentences bothered me.

Vocabulary: 7/10 - could use more vocabulary since this book has potential.

First character impression 9/10: I was surprised when being introduced to the main character who was the eighth member of the group. They came off as someone who has some secrets but hides them well due to her personality and career.

Plot: 19/20 - great plot, I enjoyed the entire story and it was so interesting to read. This book has potential and I stand firm on it.

Interaction between characters: 8/10 - they all communicate well and realistically.

Total: 81/100

3) 𝐓𝐄𝐌𝐏𝐓𝐀𝐓𝐈𝐎𝐍 ( Judged by @JungFayZay)

TITLE: 6.5/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

DESCRIPTION: 18/20

GRAMMAR: 8/10

VOCABULARY: 8/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 6/10

PLOT: 18/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7.5/10

Total:  80/100

Overall comments: The Mafia and the normal citizen trope has been famous in the fandom. And this book has a very unique approach to it. I like how everyone in the story knows something about the sketchy part of the Park family except for Y/N. There are hits and misses in aspects of the descriptions. Somewhere it’s too much and somewhere it’s too less. But I will admit, the book’s written very well and in a way where when I finish one chapter, I am automatically pressed to read the next chapter. The writing style is detailed enough to make me feel bad for the characters.

4) 𝐒𝐄𝐑𝐄𝐍𝐃𝐈𝐏𝐈𝐓𝐘 (Judged by @JungFayZay )

TITLE: 9/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 7/10

DESCRIPTION: 10/20

GRAMMAR: 5/10

VOCABULARY: 4/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 4/10

PLOT: 10/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 5/10

TOTAL: 54/100

Overall comments: I’m sorry to say this but I speed ran through the chapters. There were too many pictures, too less descriptions, and too many grammatical mistakes for me to read. I will of course applaud the plot but it was simply all over the place. Too many characters and it was a hard task figuring out who was saying what.

5) 𝐈 𝐌 𝐏𝐎𝐒𝐒𝐈𝐁𝐋𝐄 ( Judged by @JungFayZay)

TITLE: 9/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

DESCRIPTION: 16/20

GRAMMAR: 8.5/10

VOCABULARY: 8/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 8/10

PLOT: 18/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10

Total: 85/100

Overall comments: I want this to be made into a kdrama. The storyline is amazing and very well arranged. No plotholes whatsoever. I also loved how everything that was wrong worked was at least settled. All the characters were perfectly utilized and there was a reason for every single scene throughout the book. It’s very well written and well thought out. One thing I would suggest is investing in growing a better vocabulary and also a better use of literary devices. Those will help make the writing more enjoyable to read and much more impactful.

6) 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐖𝐀𝐘 𝐖𝐄 𝐆𝐎

TITLE: 8/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 7/10

DESCRIPTION: 19/20

GRAMMAR: 9/10

VOCABULARY: 7/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10

PLOT: 17/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10

TOTAL: 85/100

Overall comments: It was mysterious and it made my curiosity rise to a level that I read the whole book in 1 hour. It's different than all the usual fanfiction which made me read it more. It was a bit confusing in the beginning but as I kept reading it became better. The plot was really unique and it was well written.

7) 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐑𝐓 𝐎𝐅 𝐈𝐓 𝐀𝐋𝐋

TITLE: 8/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 7/10 (by @Winkwink07)

DESCRIPTION: 15/20

GRAMMAR: 10/10

VOCABULARY: 10/10

Please teach me English! I love the way you describe everything!

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 6/10

PLOT: 17/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10

Overall comments: I am speechless. The way you describe the seasons, the places, feelings and emotions is just amazing. It's really well written. I loved the plot and I think it has the potential.

TOTAL: 82/100

8) 𝐓𝐎𝐑𝐍 𝐁𝐄𝐓𝐖𝐄𝐄𝐍

TITLE: 8/10

It doesn't stand out but was good enough for the story.

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

I love graphics and this cover is mindblowing and also has the main characters.

DESCRIPTION: 19/20

A dialogue and some sneak peek into the story. Perfect! It made me curious and the dialogue intrigues me so much.

GRAMMAR: 10/10

Nothing left to say!

VOCABULARY: 10/10

I love that you follow the punctuation properly. And there were no grammatical errors at all which made me more willing to read. Well written. Each and every feeling was described work perfect vocabulary.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10

It was funny and you showed how they were friends from when they were babies. The interaction between them was adorable. I loved it although you should have made it a bit long!

PLOT: 16/20

It was actually a bit slow moving and each incident was dragged on for 2 to 3 chapters which made it tad a bit boring. The introduction to Jungkook was surprising. The dream that skye had of jimin and jungkook was hilarious. Overall I loved the whole story but try to complete it as soon as possible. (Personally I want to read lol ;) I love the way she got confused between Jimin and Jungkook at one point of the story. I really like the plot and would like to see the end.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 8/10

I loved the cute interactions and moments between Jimin and Skye. The first meeting with jungkook was so cute and I was squealing all throughout the chapter. The feelings were perfectly described with all the emotions.

TOTAL: 86/100

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