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TITLE: 9/10
I love the title and it's very unique and describes the female lead very precisely.
COVER OF THE BOOK: 6/10
( only the cover is judged by @Winkwink07 as the cover was made by me)
DESCRIPTION: 14/20
The description increased the curiosity but if there could be some dialogues or monologues, it would have been great! But everything else is amazing!
GRAMMAR: 4/10
There were grammatical errors and the sentence formation was not proper. Punctuations were not in places. Spelling mistakes should be avoided
VOCABULARY: 5/10
Vocabulary can be improved!
FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10
The first chapter introduced us to the start of everything like all the past and I really liked it.
PLOT: 13/20
I like the plot of step brothers and sisters. There were many cute moments but the feelings of the maknae line were too abrupt but I really loved the way yoongi was sweet! The plot was a common one but it was unique in a way as the author didn't make Y/N as a sweet, soft, coward girl as usual in other fanfictions.
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 6/10
The feelings should be more deeply described. The interaction between Y/N and Kevin was amazing!
TOTAL: 64/100
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TITLE: 8/10
The title is simple and to the point.
COVER OF THE BOOK:Β 7/10
DESCRIPTION: 13/20
The description is good but maybe a little more could have been added to it.
GRAMMAR: 6/10
There are no spelling errors and overall the grammar is good. I suggest you to use more punctuations.
VOCABULARY: 8/10
Since it's all texts, vocabulary doesn't matter much but considering that it's also a story, vocabulary could have been better.
FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 5/10
The first chapter did make me read the rest but the presentation is a little disturbing and clumsy. Also, you directly jumped onto the texts instead of giving an explanation about the situation. I hope you work on it.
PLOT: 12/20
The plot was good but the story could have been elaborated a little more.
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10
The interaction between characters was very smooth and the humor was on point.
Total:68/100
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TITLE: 6/10
The title like it was a general one. It could have been more unique
COVER OF THE BOOK: 7/10
DESCRIPTION: 15/20
I wished that it gave some more information and some dialogues that make us more curious.
GRAMMAR: 10/10
The grammar and punctuations were all followed and there were no grammatical errors!
VOCABULARY: 10/10
I loved the way you described every detail!
FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10
The first chapter was amazing and made me curious about what happened in the next chapter!
PLOT: 18/20
There was not much of a serious plot of villain and all but it was a cute imagines book and the relation between all the members and Deiji was soo cute! Overall I loved the book!!!
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10
The interaction was too cute for my heart to handle!
TOTAL: 85/100
4) ππππ ππππππ: πππ« ππ§π π₯π¨π―π (Judged by @dynamjoonics_)
TITLE: 9/10 - interesting and catchy title which is very rare.
COVER: 10/10 - well designed cover which displays all of the characters which they are not swamped on top of each other. Well done.
DESCRIPTION: 18/20 - it drew my attention and made it intriguing for me to read it.
GRAMMAR: 7/10 - few grammatical mistakes present but not too much.
VOCABULARY: 7/10 - lacks the level of vocabulary due to the plot and the context of the story
FIRST CHARACTER IMPRESSION: 8/10 - I was intrigued by the main character when I was introduced to them which made me want to know more about them.
PLOT: 18/20- interesting plot however I do believe that it's a little bit cliche since there are other books I've read with the similar context however I loved how each since was based on each character of the story. Well done once again.
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 8/10 - interactions seem realistic but sometimes far fetched.
Total: 85/100
5) πππ πππππ ππ πππ (Judged by
@nonuser975)
TITLE: 9/10
COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10
DESCRIPTION: 17/20
I wish the description would have some dialogues which would give a sneak peek of the story.
GRAMMAR: 10/10
VOCABULARY: 10/10
FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10
PLOT: 9/20
To be honest the plot is overused ans I couldn't enjoy it properly as the plot is already predicted.
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 8/10
TOTAL: 78/100
6) πππ ππππππππ
TITLE: 8/10
Could have been more relatable to the story and more creative.
COVER OF THE BOOK: 5/10
The cover was roo bright and there was no title of the book on it. The faces were not clear.
DESCRIPTION: 18/20
Perfect! But would be nice if it gave a sneak peek of the book with the dialogues.
GRAMMAR: 5/10
Punctuation was not followed and the symbols were wrongly inserted in the places. I suggest using full forms of words like 'Okay' instead of 'ok'. The POVs kept changing from first person to third person. There were grammatical errors and spelling mistakes too.
VOCABULARY: 7/10
Can be improved and can come up with new words!
FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10
I think the presentation of the paragraphs was a bit messed up.The dialogues should be written with a gap between each of them. It was confusing. But besides all these, the chapter was interesting and unique which made eager to read.
PLOT: 16/20
The plot was no doubt a unique one. I was so invested into it that I didn't even know when I completed reading. It would be nice if you complete the book. It's very interesting.
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 6/10
Actually I cannot judge this properly because the story was in middle but the relationship between Y/N and her friends was amazing.
TOTAL: 72/100
7) 13 πππππππππ
TITLE: 10/10
COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10
DESCRIPTION: 20/20
Perfect description! I loved the little dialogue you added there which made me eager to read the book!
GRAMMAR: 10/10
VOCABULARY: 10/10
The way you described each and every feeling was extraordinary. I really love the way of your writing. And the curses are too creative lol. I'll use them at my friends sometime. I learnt new words as I went through your story. Thank you for that!
FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 10/10
I felt the story was totally different from the other fanfics. The way you described the scene made me want to read more.
PLOT: 16/20
The plot was fantastic and it's not a plot that we could predict like the typical ones. I loved the mixture of fantasy and fiction. Even though I am judging this right now, I'll definitely read this book once it's finished. And also try to be regular at posting chapters once you started the book.
INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10
The friendship of the girls was adorable. They understood each other like they were blood related.
TOTAL: 94/100
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