1) 𝐂𝐄𝐋𝐄𝐁𝐑𝐈𝐓𝐘

TITLE: 8/10

The title is a very good fit for the story you have written!

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10 (The cover was judged by @Winkwink07)

DESCRIPTION: 11/20

The description is good but I wish you could have added more to it. A conversation and a sneak peek of the story would have been better!

GRAMMAR: 7/10

There were no grammatical errors and it was a perfect sentence construction! And there were absolutely no spelling mistakes. But try putting more punctuation!

VOCABULARY: 6/10

The vocabulary was perfect but if you stop using abbreviations then it would be better! And try using more complicated words!

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10

Yes! The first chapter made me want to read more.

PLOT: 15/20

Even though the plot was common, it had humor and I absolutely enjoyed reading it! But I wish you would have described the feelings of the character more.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7/10

TOTAL: 74/100

2) 𝐍𝐔𝐌𝐁𝐄𝐑 1 |~|

TITLE: 5/10

The title of the book was not suitable for the story. If it was more accurate, it would have been incredible

COVER OF THE BOOK: 6/10

The cover of the book is amazing but it is not related to the story in any way. It can be improved! It's cute tho

DESCRIPTION: 10/20

I wish there was more description about the story. Or some dialogues which could make us curious about the plot of the story.

GRAMMAR: 9/10

The grammar and sentence formations were amazing. There were no errors and the punctuation was in the right place.

VOCABULARY: 7/10

The vocabulary was too good and there is no need for improvement. But the presentation of the chapters should be improved. Like writing paragraphs of 3 to 4 lines.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10

I loved the first chapter and it made me want to read more.

PLOT: 17/20

The plot was cool and it was unique too. It was amazing and I really loved it and it was not the typical same story lol.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7/10

I loved the interaction between all of them! But if there was a more deep explanation for the feelings developing between them, it would have been amazing.

TOTAL: 68/100

3) 𝐌𝐀𝐅𝐈𝐀 𝐒𝐓𝐄𝐏𝐁𝐑𝐎𝐓𝐇𝐄𝐑𝐒

TITLE: 6/10

The title was suitable but it was not for a Taehyung fanfiction

COVER OF THE BOOK: 5/10

There was no title on the cover and I wish the picture would have been related to mafia.

DESCRIPTION: 20/20

It made us curious with thst one dialogue and a little sneak peek.

GRAMMAR: 3/10

Correct punctuation should be used at the correct time! Sentence formation and grammatical errors were frequent. There were spelling mistakes.

VOCABULARY: 4/10

It could be improved instead of simple words and sometimes I found that it was not specifying who was talking and the gender. Should be more specific.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 8/10

I think it was good enough and made us want to read the next chapter!

PLOT: 7/20

I think I was a bit unrealistic in the beginning how they forgot that they were once related and all. She accepted the feelings so easily and forgave easily. It was all unrealistic.The zombie, Truth or dare in an island, Jin coming to save them alone? And sometimes, the female lead decided that she doesn't like him but the next moment she said she loved him. There were too many time skips and were too long.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 4/10

There was no interaction between the main leads. Without the special moments and without spending time with each other, they developed feelings. It was not realistic and the feelings of the female lead were very confusing.

TOTAL: 57/100

4) 𝐂𝐀𝐍'𝐓 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐁𝐄 𝐌𝐈𝐍𝐄 ( Judged by @nonuser975)

TITLE: 7/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 9/10

DESCRIPTION: 15/20

Could be improved my adding alittle but of sneak peek into the plot.

GRAMMAR: 4/10

Punctuation was not followed and all the special symbols were used carelessly.

VOCABULARY: 8/10

Instead of pictures, please try describing the item as much as you can! It makes the book more elegant.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10

PLOT: 10/20

The plot was not that enjoyable as it was totally based on the kdrama 'boys over flowers'. The plot was too predictable

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7/10

Total: 67/100

5) 𝐀𝐑𝐓 𝐎𝐅 𝐁𝐋𝐄𝐄𝐃𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐑𝐓 ( Judged by @JungFayZay)

TITLE: 8/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

DESCRIPTION: 16/20

GRAMMAR: 6/10

VOCABULARY: 6/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 8/10

PLOT: 18/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 8/10

Total:  78/100

Overall comments: Gosh the storyline of this; absolutely painful! The emotions were right on point, and I was almost too sad to continue reading. That’s when you know the story is well written and the emotions are conveyed well. The only shortcoming of this book, was the frequent miss of punctuation and grammar which was really interrupting the flow of reading. Also, the frequent pictures were also a bit annoying but other than that, the book was really amazing.

6) 𝐁𝐋𝐎𝐎𝐃 𝐀𝐍𝐃 𝐀𝐒𝐇

TITLE: 10/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 10/10

DESCRIPTION: 20/20

I really like the small poem type you created there to make us curious. It really triggered me to read.

GRAMMAR: 8/10

Everything fine except the punctuation.

VOCABULARY: 10/10

The description of entrance of Kings to Earth was majestic. I loved it the most.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10

I love the introduction chapter. It was aesthetic with the pictures and all. The first chapter was amazing but I suggest you to use full forms and punctuation marks shouldn't be more than one. (Ex: !!!! Shouldn't be used only ! is enough). And describe the feeling instead of writing it in between asterisks)

PLOT: 16/20

I loved the chapter of their childhood. It's so cute. The plot was unique and I have never seen this era in any other book. But it would shave been more nice with the whole story and about what happened with Namjoon. Try to update as fast as you can ( so that I can complete the book as my curiosity is killing me ;)

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7/10

I still cannot judge this because I don't know how the realtion between them will be in future. But for now I rate it basing on what I think.

TOTAL: 91/100

7) 𝐖𝐇𝐄𝐍 𝐇𝐈𝐒 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐑𝐓 𝐅𝐄𝐋𝐓 𝐋𝐎𝐕𝐄 ( Judged by @Dynamjoonics_)

TITLE: 9/10 - very catchy title

COVER: 8/10 - well designed cover, enhances the characters features well

DESCRIPTION: 20/20 - the description is well written which caught my attention instantly and immediately wanted me to start reading.

GRAMMAR: 8/10 - few grammatical mistakes present but they are very minor.

VOCABULARY: 10/10 - good choice of vocabulary.

FIRST CHARACTER IMPRESSION: 9/10 - I was immediately drawn into the original character because of her personality and her "voice". Well written.

PLOT: 18/20 - great plot, it's very unique and original.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10 - realistic dialogues which made it easy to connect and understand them.

Total: 91/100

8) 𝐑𝐄 𝐁𝐞𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠: 𝐅𝐀𝐈𝐓𝐇 (Judged by @JungFayZay)

TITLE: 6/10 

COVER OF THE BOOK: 9/10

DESCRIPTION: 12/20

GRAMMAR: 7.5/10

VOCABULARY: 8/10

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7.5/10

PLOT: 16/20

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 9/10

Total: 75/100

Overall comments: It was a good book to begin with. The pacing was a bit slow, which was making it a bit difficult for me to stay interested in reading. One thing I really loved about the story was the relationship between the main characters; Luna, Jimin and Hoseok. Even Taehyung and Luna’s relationship was very precious. One of the things that really bothered me was the unnecessary details in some scenes and the lack of details in some. The blurb of the book was also a bit messy and kinda all over the place, so I’d just suggest fixing it. There were also some minor grammatical errors which, I’m sure can be easily fixable. Overall, it was a good storyline which I believe will be a good read with some minor alterations;