π‰π‰πŠ π‘π„π•πˆπ„π–π’


So here are the reviews of your books and your points for each of the judging criteria! I hope you will improve them!

1) 𝐓𝐇𝐄 π“π‘πŽπ”ππ‹π„πŒπ€πŠπ„π‘π’

TITLE: 8/10

The title is a bit unsuitable for the story. there could have been a better title than this!

COVER OF THE BOOK: 9/10

honestly, I love the cover of the book and it's matching the vibes of the book too!

DESCRIPTION: 13/20

The description gave a brief idea about the story but if there was more description that made us curious, it would have been amazing. Dialogues and some small sneak peek would have been great!

GRAMMAR: 5/10

There are many spelling mistakes and the punctuations are not proper. The sentence formation is also poor.

VOCABULARY: 6/10

There should be a use of good vocabulary. There is an influence of the mother tongue in between.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 5/10

The first chapter dragged a lot and had too much description for every little detail which is not needed. But very little description of what was needed to be described. It made me interested in the beginning but boring in between.

PLOT: 15/20

The plot is a bit unique, I liked it. But their feelings changed too fast for each other and the story did not show the process. It is a cute story and there are many cute moments in them but a bit more description would have been amazing.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 6/10

The story went from hating to loving. so the interactions and feelings should be described in detail but the story straight off went from 'I hate you' to 'I love you' in a very less interval.

TOTAL: 67/100


2) π‘π„π•πŽπ‹π”π“πˆπŽπ

TITLE: 7/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10 (Judged by @Winkwink07)

DESCRIPTION: 17/20

The story is quite short and the description is perfect for it.

GRAMMAR: 10/10

The grammar is too good! No complaints

VOCABULARY: 10/10

Bro pls teach me English I love your vocabulary and the way you describe it. I am your fan omg

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10

I love the first chapter. The amount of curiosity increased is just amazing. I was eager to read the next.

PLOT: 18/20

I loved the plot. It's so remarkable and I was mesmerized by the way you write. A short story in which so much took place.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7/10

There was not much interaction between the main leads except for the last chapter. I wish there was more but the bond between the members was remarkable.

TOTAL: 86/100


3) ππ‘πŽπ…π„π’π’πŽπ‘ π‰π„πŽπ

TITLE: 8/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 9/10

DESCRIPTION: 16/20

The description was a bit short. I wish there was more sneak peek into the story. But as it is a short story, I think it was good

GRAMMAR: 5/10

There were grammatical errors and the sentence formation was not correct along with the tenses. The punctuation was not correct too

VOCABULARY: 6/10

you can improve your vocabulary!

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 6/10

The first chapter did not make me that curious. It was a bit unrealistic.

PLOT: 9/20

It had a drastic change in a matter of 1 para. I wish there were more feelings expressed and the feelings of the main leads changed too quickly which was unrealistic.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 3/10

There was no interaction at all. They just fell in love in only 1 para. They did not share any moments which made them fall in love. I wish there was more that was expressed!

TOTAL: 62/100

4) 𝐒𝐍𝐀𝐏𝐂𝐇𝐀𝐓

TITLE: 10/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 7/10

The cover was good but I wish it would have been more clear and bright!

DESCRIPTION: 18/20

I love the description. It increases the curiosity in us and it made me want to read more. It gave a glimpse of the plot. Perfect!

GRAMMAR: 9/10

There are no mistakes and all the punctuation are perfectly done.

VOCABULARY: 9/10

I love it! The vocabulary and the style of writing is exactly like Snapchat! The words which perfectly used in the correct places.

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 7/10

It was short but it made me curious to read. I wish it would have been bigger!

PLOT: 18/20

I seriously loved the whole story and it never got boring. The whole 200 chapters were so funny and entertaining and I loved Molly's humor! The plot was remarkable.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10

I loved the interaction between all of them. Got7, BTS, Molly, and Alice. Especially Molly and Jackson! I loved it! Jungkook and Molly were Cute af. The cute moments all made me smile so hard.

TOTAL: 88/100

5) 𝐓𝐇𝐄 ππ‹πŽπŽπƒ πŽπ… 𝐀 π†π”πŒπˆπ‡πŽ

TITLE: 10/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

The book title is not clearly written and is cut off. But the editing of the mountain and trees behind is amazing!

DESCRIPTION: 19/20

I loved the description as it developed a sense of curiosity in me.

GRAMMAR: 10/10

The punctuation was followed! And no grammatical errors were found.

VOCABULARY: 10/10

The vocabulary used was remarkable and I loved the way you described everything!

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 9/10

The first chapter was amazing and my curiosity killed me to read the next chapter! The book is unique!

PLOT: 20/20

I loved this book! It's the best plot I have ever read and the unexpected villain who changed in the last. I never want this book to end. It's like I was literally living in the book and all the mystical creatures are real!

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10

I love the interaction between all the characters and the way Yoongi changed is just indescribable. The group of friends and the emotions between them was amazing.

TOTAL: 96/100

6) 𝐌𝐘 π‡πŽπ“ πƒπ„πŒπŽπ

TITLE: 10/10

COVER OF THE BOOK: 10/10

Absolutely speechless!

DESCRIPTION: 14/20

It was good enough but since it is a long story I wish there would have been a little bit of a sneak peek of the story.

GRAMMAR: 10/10

VOCABULARY: 10/10

I love the way you described everything in detail

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 10/10

It definitely triggered my curious self!

PLOT: 20/20

I was literally squealing like crazy in the first 5 chapters. The plot is unique and I loved the concept of devils and angels. And the twist of her murderer is just OMG AHHHH. I got crazy at the end of each chapter which was always a surprise! The romance between them was beautifully presented. This story gave me butterflies in my stomach. The way the other guys were always jealous. And the sudden arrival of Jungkook's mother, the spell, and the last twist of the villain. I never wanted the book to end.

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10

Speechless. The interaction between the main leads was so cute and the guys were sweethearts. The relationship between Y/N and the guys was too good and Leo omg I loved him.

TOTAL: 94/100

7) πŒπ‘. 𝐀𝐍𝐃 πŒπ‘π’. π‚π„πŽ

TITLE: 7/10

The title was too simple! It can be improved.

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10

DESCRIPTION: 20/20

Perfect description!

GRAMMAR: 7/10

There were no grammatical errors and the punctuation was followed! There were spelling mistakes here and there but other than that, everything else was fine.

VOCABULARY: 8/10

No words to be spoken!

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 10/10

It increased my curiosity and the interaction between the main leads was heart fluttering! I loved it!

PLOT: 20/20

The plot is unique, unlike all the other typical romantic stories. I love how there are questions at the end of every chapter. I appreciate the fact that you concentrated on the second couple's moments too. everything was perfectly portrayed and overall I loved the story!

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10

The interaction between both siblings was adorable. Even though Tae and Lily were not blood-related, it felt like it! The main leads and the second couple's interaction was so cute and the moments between the main leads were just heart-fluttering!

TOTAL: 90/100

8) π…π‘π€π†πˆπ‹π„ πŒπˆππƒπ’ 𝐀𝐍𝐃 𝐑𝐔𝐓𝐇𝐋𝐄𝐒𝐒 𝐇𝐄𝐀𝐑𝐓𝐒

TITLE: 7/10

The title was unique and it totally suited it! however, it was a long title!

COVER OF THE BOOK: 8/10 (Judged by @Winkwink07)

DESCRIPTION: 20/20

The ideal description that I wanted for all the stories! It was perfect with a little bit of dialogue! Incredible!

GRAMMAR: 7/10

The grammar was amazing but I suggest not using short forms like cuz or u in the story. Rarely, I could see that there were some grammatical errors sentences and some spelling mistakes!

VOCABULARY: 10/10

Perfect! I loved the way you describe everything and it was on the point!

FIRST CHAPTER IMPRESSION: 8/10

The pictures on the top gave an aesthetic vibe to it! It made me curious and it's unique, unlike the typical fanfictions! The description of her style was remarkable! But I think the presentation of the paragraphs and gaps could be used more!

PLOT: 15/20

First of all, I loved the way you left cliffhangers at the end of the chapters which created the urge to read the next one! And the main leads Aerin and Jungkook's bickerings were too funny. Aerin's sassiness is something I envy lol! The plot till now is amazing but I am curious about what would come in the future!

INTERACTION BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 10/10

The bond between Yoonmin and Jungkook was adorable! And then Hoseok comforts Aerin, and her best friends understands her personal space, the moments between Aerin and Hoseok were beautiful.

TOTAL: 85/100

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