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IN THE KINGDOM OF THORNS by theportraitofhistory

review

concept and plot: 9.5/10
the concept seems so interesting and unique. you described the concept very well. i like the mention of her past life and some details. it was perfect.

character: 10/10
the character you mentioned was showing its emotions perfectly. the character was herself very interesting. i don't have words to describe how perfect it was.

grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
there were no grammatical mistakes, and the vocabulary used was just fine and perfect for the atmosphere of the prologue.

writing style: 9.5/10
the prologue was in perfect length and was impressively well described. you mentioned every necessary thing needed for understanding the story.... just perfect.

overall: 10/10
overall, very well done.

total: 49/50

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HIS RENTAL GF by ViniShah2

concept and plot: 9/10
the concept seems to be really interesting but the prologue seems like serious stuff. i found the characters interesting. it didn't give me any idea but made me read it further.

character: 10/10
the characters mentioned are described well, they have a good and well-assigned personality as i can see in the prologue.

grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
the grammar used was perfect, with no mistakes... not even minor errors. the vocabulary you used was rich and fancy... it satisfies the atmosphere created in the prologue.

writing style: 9.5/10
the writing style was pretty good. you described all the necessary information needed to be in a prologue. it was also the perfect length.

overall: 9/10
overall, just to be clear about the concept in the prologue... everything else is perfect.

total: 47/50

REMEMBER YOU by Pviscelle

concept: 9.5/10

the concept of the story is way more unique than anything i read. it captured my attention to read more and i found the main character (taehyung) very creative and with an amazing personality. the life perspective of the main character is different and i can see a great plot ahead.

character: 9.5/10

the character you designed for taehyung was great. you didn't mention the flaws directly but i feel the flaws and perfection are both in balance. it's kinda cool you come up with such a character. it was easy to get the taste of these emotions. you showed a great passionate character toward art! it's really great.

grammar and vocabulary: 9.5/10

the grammar used was perfect, with no mistakes... not even minor errors. the vocabulary you used was rich and fancy... it satisfies the atmosphere created in the prologue.

writing style: 7/10

a prologue means to provide background information or context about the story. but your prologue was like a whole-length chapter of taehyung's childhood. you did great by adding some scenes but it was too lengthy to be called a prologue

overall: 8/10

overall, everything is perfect, grammar is on point, rich vocabulary, good character design, interesting plot, and concept but the prologue was lengthy itself.

total: 43.5/50

RECKLESS HEART by lanayse

concept: 7.5/10

i didn't get much idea about the concept, as there was an introduction of y/n while she was working.

maybe it's a romantic story concept... i can only say much but sure interesting.

character: 7/10

the characters you mentioned were two, y/n and a man. you didn't describe the character well, you have to mention his/her past life and the cause of his/her current situation.

grammar and vocabulary: 9.5/10

the grammar used was on point, i didn't find any errors. the vocabulary you used was rich and satisfying as per the situation.

writing style: 8/10

the length of the prologue was a little short but fine. try to write about y/n's past with some dialogue. though it was mysterious and really interesting to read further. but not so much to know about the introduced character.

overall: 8/10

overall, everything was good. try to me more descriptive yet short with 1000 words it would be good to read.

total: 40/50

TO KILL OR LOVE by misstalksalot2000

concept and plot: 8.5/10

the concept of the story seems to be very interesting as it mentions "guns" and "murder" at the start. this prologue is so interesting to captivate anyone's mind. but you need to be more descriptive

character: 8/10

there was no specific character intro yet two of them were mentioned and the intro was in pov format. it's kinda great to know about the issue the character is faced with. need more to be written.

grammar and vocabulary: 9.510

the grammar was good and on point, no errors were found. the vocabulary you used was causal and suitable for the character and story.

writing style: 6/10

the length of your prologue was too small. you didn't mention the background life of your character. it was like a small introduction to the story. the prologue should be at least 1000 words add more about the setting, scene, characters, or overall topic

overall: 6/10

the prologue was not so descriptive, and there wasn't anyone's past life mentioned in any way.

total: 38/50

DEADLY DESIRES by localtaxhoe

concept and plot: 8.5/10

the concept of the story seems to be interesting and mysterious... it didn't give me much idea about the overall topic but surely made me want to read.

character: 8/10

the character of the girl was mentioned more, her emotions were described in a good way. but there weren't any descriptive details about the character.

grammar and vocabulary: 10/10

there were no grammatical mistakes, everything was on point. the vocabulary used was rich and strong with creative sentences.

writing style: 9/10

the prologue was in perfect length and with good starting and ending points. the scene which awakens the mysteriousness of the part was well settled. only you need to mention the past life or any past situation about the character.

overall: 8/10

overall, everything was perfect... just some changes.

total: 43.5/50

OF SHARP STONEs. THE LOST BOYs by Paradisecitylights

concept and plot: 10/10

the concept seems so mysterious and interesting. it really blew my mind. i am so into witches and stuff. so it was such an interesting concept.

character: 9.5/10

the characters were well described and showed their emotions well. you created a well-described personality and their life.

grammar and vocabulary: 10/10

there were no grammatical mistakes, the vocabulary used was just fine and perfect for the atmosphere of the prologue.

writing style: 8/10

the writing style was fine, good to see you being so descriptive but a prologue should be short. the prologue you wrote was big and was a chapter itself.

overall: 8/10

overall, everything was perfect but not the length.

total: 45.5/50

TRAIN TO LOVE by parkaecha14

concept and plot: 5/10
the story of the concept was good but i didn't get much about it, it feels like a small intro.

character: 0/10
no characters were mentioned… it was like a description/intro.

grammar: 9.5/10
the grammar was good, with no errors. the vocabulary was fine as per the atmosphere of the story.

writing style: 4/10
so, here comes the main part… first of all let me tell you what prologue is. prologues act as introductions that tell readers more about the setting, scene, characters, or overall topic. the prologue you wrote was like an introduction to the upcoming story.

overall: 5/10
you need to be descriptive about your story while being careful about not giving spoilers… that's all i wanna say.

total: 23.5/50

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