Book Name: The Lands of Ranuula: Zantii's Assualt

Author: @sanch250

Reviewer: May

Cover: 0/05

It has nothing on it except a picture. Please put a title and author name, and maybe some figures too like a war going on or something like that. Just silhouettes. 

Title: 4/05

It compliments the plot but I have completely no idea what you are talking about in the whole book. 

Synopsis: 7/10

It looks too lengthy, try to shorten it down more and don't make the paragraphs too big because then it doesn't make me wanna read the book. Briefly describe the plot and keep a small, interesting dialogue too. The second paragraph should be written first then the first paragraph should be written second, remove the 3rd paragraph and write it separately in a disclaimer/copyright chapter. 

Execution: 8/10

It was well executed, but a bit fast paced. 

Plot: 18/20

It's a good plot, I like the concept. Also, I don't wanna offend anyone but it looks something out of Indian history. Everything looks a bit confusing to me but it also feels like Indian history because of the names, hope I didn't offend you though. 

If it is inspired from Indian history, I think you should mention it and if not then I have to read the books before this one to get a better grasp of the plot but if I have to judge it like this then I like the plot line. It s a it fast-paced but since you intend to end the book with 9 chapters only, I think it's fair. 

Writing Style: 18/20

It's really heavy and descriptive and I love it. Even though I blank out at times but it also had me captivated. Don't go too heavy on the writing, though. 

Grammar & Vocabulary: 18.5/20

Your vocabulary is simple but you have a way with words. You are able to organize those simple English words into descriptive phrases but a little vocabulary enhancement won't do you any harm. 

You are supposed to use "periods" after "action tags" and not "commas" which I saw you using, so be careful there. 

Characters & Development: 6.5/10

The characters are good but I would like some more introduction to them which I believe I can only get from the first book of this series but I don't have that luxury so I can't tell much about the characters or their developments. It's one of the downsides of reviewing the-not-first book of a series. 

Total: 80/100

Final Note: It's a good book and I enjoyed it. I don't think it needs to be that much reviewed, I didn't find many weaknesses in it but I would still like it if you took in the suggestions I had given.