Book 'Melody's Derail' by oddella

Reviewer: Elinah

All in all score to achieve: 100

For following the said rules: 5/5
•Thank you for following the rules!

Reader interaction: 5/5
•The comments were in a good amount of number. I myself, is a commentist (if that's a word) too.

As for the book cover: 3/5
•In my opinion, I actually loved the previous one than the current. As the header, it should be more attractive to readers.

Written description: 5/5
•It got me hooked up. I actually wondered what Jimin meant about his statement.

Chosen book title: 10/10
•It wasn't a cliché type. Titles like that are very unique and sometimes rare to see. It gives off a pretty vibe to the book, and I like it.

Story plot: 8.2/10
•I still haven't get the main plot since it was still incomplete. For me, it was kinda confusing at the first glance as you go on.

Grammarian: 10/10
•The grammar and vocabulary was well written. It was really expressive towards the readers, and to be honest, you actually write better than me. Hehe. I really love the style.

The plot-twist: 6.5/10
•As I go by, I haven't set a sight with some plot twists that made me throw my mind outside the window. But maybe in the near future, you'd be able to write an amazing plot twist.

Character development: 8/10
•The development was still on the line, but it's okay. I love it that it's not going to fast like a second. Emotions were portrayed neatly just by reading at the phrases.

Creative way I writing: 10/10
•As I repeat, the vocabulary and words were very strong written. I may also learnt new words from the story. Though it may need more dialogues, all in all, it was great.

Opinion rate for the book: 9/10

Self-povs

•Before everything else, I would want to say that all my words aren't meant to offend, nor hurt you. These are only honest, sincere and genuine sayings.

•The book itself wasn't cliché, or cheesy. Though I'm not a big fan of genre's like that myself, I'd say it really impressed me. From the way you write, to the terms you used to describe each event.

•Characters from Melody's Derail were all unique. It wasn't the typical poor boy, rich girl, or the popular boy, loner girl. It was totally different. I also liked how the book started from a pool party of some sort. It was just right.

•The sequence of the events weren't moving quickly. It was at moderate speed. Also when every chapter, you always placed the time being and the location at the very start. It somehow reminded me of my phone clock, and I don't know why haha.

•The description of the book isn't really revealing, so it's plus the points. The way it got me hooked was also a good impact. From what Jimin said, I suddenly felt BATS inside me haha.

•As a fellow writer, maybe add more dialogues to help. I know half of the readers, including me may want some more conversations between the characters to give more emphasis to what's happening. Your writing skills I have seen, doesn't contain anything wrong. Just the dialogue. Also try and write some scenes that can intrigue readers that they were intrigued before. That way, you could get many more good feedback. Although your current feedbacks are really great. They're loving you and your story.

•As an aspiring writer, I may not be a veteran, or even a professional one, but I can assure you that being patient and consistent is one of the keys to make great success with your book. Although you may encounter hard times sooner or later, always think about those eager readers who inspire you to write more and more. Don't get stressed when coming up with fresh ideas to add, instead, try listening to music, or reading some other books so it could give you idea and inspiration.

•By this simple opinion, I hope you may get the point I want to say. Never, ever give up on writing. I hope this helps! Thank you for choosing me as you reviewer and good luck!!!!