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β AJ. finally mixtapers, the day has arrived for us to announce the OT7 category results...
but first, let's have a round of applause for all auditionees(participants), they have worked their level-best on their books, so please do not be disheartened if you didn't make it to the mixtapes.
a big round of applause for our judges too, who spent their precious time judging the books and we all acknowledge and appreciate your efforts.
Judges:: dynamic_dream and taes_smirk
ok, the ones who made it...
3rd. MIXTAPE μ§μ (knowledge)
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0BSESSION
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by: SIMPS_FOR_BTS__
[ Simps_for_BTS__ ]
β TITLE. 5 pts.
Ash- 5/5
AJ- 5/5
β COVER. 10 pts.
Ash- 8/10
AJ- 9/10
β DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.
Ash- 9/10
AJ- 8/10
β PLOT. 20 pts.
Ash- 17/20
AJ- 20/20
β CHARACTER. 10 pts.
Ash- 9/10
AJ- 10/10
β WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.
Ash- 9/10
AJ- 10/10
β GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.
Ash- 8/10
AJ- 10/10
β SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.
Ash- 8/10
AJ- 10/10
β STRUCTURE. 5 pts.
Ash- 4/5
AJ- 5/5
β IMPRESSION. 10 pts.
Ash- 8/10
AJ- 9/10
β SUMMARY.
Ash- The title is overused but again, if it matches with your story, it's perfect and there is no need to change. The cover is okay, the blurb was perfect. Made me keen to know more. I like the way how you portrayed each character and how each one of them has their own story + obsession. Grammar is nice as well as vocabulary.
AJ- ok so the title is good, especially the 0 instead of o. the cover is dark and nice but since blackpink is there too, how about an overlay of them in the bg, good? i think so!! the description gave nothing except the meaning of obsession, so you might want to add some quotes from the chapters. rest everything was really good and grammar was perfect. impression would be better if u change the description and cover since those are the first impressions of the book!!
β POINTS. 100
Ash- 85/100
AJ- 96/100
β AVERAGE. 90.5/ 100
β HOST REVIEW
AJ- i am the judge only so, congratulations!!
2nd. MIXTAPE μ΄μ (passion)
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THE LOST DAUGHTER
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by: AESTHETICVIP3012
[ Aestheticvip3012 ]
β TITLE. 5 pts.
Ash- 4/5
AJ- 5/5
β COVER. 10 pts.
Ash- 7/10
AJ- 7/10
β DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.
Ash- 7/10
AJ- 7/10
β PLOT. 20 pts.
Ash- 17/20
AJ- 20/20
β CHARACTER. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.
Ash- 9/10
AJ- 10/10
β SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 9/10
β STRUCTURE. 5 pts.
Ash- 5/5
AJ- 5/5
β IMPRESSION. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β SUMMARY.
Ash- The title is a bit common, and the cover could have been better. The blurb is a bit lengthy, but I won't mind since you showed one of the best scene. The book is amazing, with an amazing plot and writing. I love it.
AJ- the only thing i didn't like were the cover and description. the cover looked so simple for an action book, also i didn't like how you gave the names on top of their heads! the description had a lot of grammatical errors and killed the vibe! rest was beautiful, i was in love with your writing style and descriptions, good job aes! :)
β POINTS. 100
Ash- 89/100
AJ- 93/100
β AVERAGE. 91/ 100
β HOST REVIEW
AJ- i am the judge only so, congratulations!!
1st. MIXTAPE μ¬λ (love)
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THE THINGUMMY
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by: EMPRESS_NOORIE
[ Empress_Noorie ]
β TITLE. 5 pts.
Ash- 5/5
AJ- 5/5
β COVER. 10 pts.
Ash- 9/10
AJ- 10/10
β DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β PLOT. 20 pts.
Ash- 18/20
AJ- 20/20
β CHARACTER. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.
Ash- 9/10
AJ- 10/10
β GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.
Ash- 8/10
AJ- 9/10
β SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β STRUCTURE. 5 pts.
Ash- 5/5
AJ- 5/5
β IMPRESSION. 10 pts.
Ash- 10/10
AJ- 10/10
β SUMMARY.
Ash- The title intrigued me, cover is beautiful the font could have better. Blurb is perfect and so does your book. It is so well written, with an amazing plot some grammar mistake I didn't find any flaw in your book.
AJ- okay, i am in love with the book, it has everything just at it's perfect amount and is just so lovely!! the mystery, action and every emotion was portrayed beautifully, only i notice a few grammar mistakes, but it is almost negligible!! great work!! :)
β POINTS. 100
Ash- 94/100
AJ- 99/100
β AVERAGE. 96.5/ 100
β HOST REVIEW
AJ- i am the judge only so, congratulations!!
the rest of the marks are...
β AJ.
congratulations to the ones who made it, good luck to other participants, and thanks to our judges...
well i guess this is it!! wait, i got a thank you chapter!!
thank you all for being with mixtape aye!!!
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