━ AJ. finally mixtapers, the day has arrived for us to announce the MIN YOONGI category results...

but first, let's have a round of applause for all auditionees(participants), they have worked their level-best on their books, so please do not be disheartened if you didn't make it to the mixtapes.

a big round of applause for our judges too, who spent their precious time judging the books and we all acknowledge and appreciate your efforts.

Judges:: taekrokosmos_ and Gonewiththewind03

ok, the ones who made it...

3rd. MIXTAPE 지식 (knowledge)

╔═══ ∘◦ ☆ ◦∘ ═══╗

HIDE AND SEEK

╚═══ ∘◦ ❉ ◦∘ ═══╝

by: YOLAMNICEPAPRIKA

[ YoIamnicepaprika_7 ]

━ TITLE. 5 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 5/5 The title perfectly matches with the storyline. It gives that eerie and mysterious vibes encouraging the readers to check out the story.

gonewiththewind03 - 5/5The title fits it perfectly. Yoongi's murderous ways and his escape is the first thing that came to my mind.

━ COVER. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10The cover was what we call, *inserts Kim Taehyung voice*....... GUCCI.I am amazed author nim. It was dark, mysterious, uncanny and the red aesthetic gives the spooky vibes which is more-than-perfect for the story. Also, the detailed illustrative covers inside the story were worth a huge round of applause. My suggestion for you is, open a tutorial on how to make these, I'll be the first one to join ;)

gonewiththewind03 - 7/10I love the picture used in here. It makes the horror in the story feel real. The only part I slightly don't find amusing is the title. If a darker colour is used, it would be better. It's quite translucent.

━ DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 8/10The description quote is suitable for the storyline, just that a little bit more intro would have been better, but never mind that one line is enough to draw readers to check out what's inside.

gonewiththewind03 - 8/10It piques interest in the reader for sure, but it would be expected to have more than one line. But, given that it is a short story, it's acceptable.

━ PLOT. 20 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 18/20"Short-and-sweet". No, doesn't match. Wait, let me try once again, "Short-and-sinister". Yup, this one suite better.From the starting to the end, this book kept me grounded. The story is unique and original, something which is rare in this world of Wattpad. Describing a psychopath as a protagonist is not an easy task. Ma'am, you did it too well. Also the suspense, the creepy actions were so well-written. It gave me one of those Psychological-horror movie vibes.

gonewiththewind03 - 19/20Loved it fully. The thrill, the suspense, the mystery and the betrayal felt real. Yoongi showing the proper signs of a psychopath and how it advances is explained wonderfully. Jimin and Jin with the plot twist and undercover were quite unexpected. For sure, it got me excited. And, the chocolate, played quite an important role ;).

━ CHARACTER. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 9/10Yoongi and his ghost-coach Youra noona.The elicit scary and spine-chilling characters created a 'Joker' movie-like aura. Yoongi was gradually manipulated by Youra in becoming more of blood lusted psychopath to Youra trying to convert Yoongi to a demon, everything was too flawless. Also, Jimin's and Jin's entry was quite thrilling. But the end where it is not clear whether Youra was a ghost or just a fragment of Yoongi's imaginative mind left me hanging. Eagerly waiting for the sequel.

gonewiththewind03 - 10/10Yoongi's character was pretty awesome. Though he was the antagonist in some ways, it shows how his childhood affected him. Obviously, in bad ways. Yoongi trusted Jimin with his secret, and then the latter outing him. Again with Jin in the alternative ending.

━ WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10Your way of writing was 'Smooth like Butter'. From starting each chapter by describing Yoongi's past to relating it with how it was affecting him in his present actions was just *chef's kiss*. Also, the way the story has been written once from Yoongi's point of view where all his actions were controlled by his noona (or he thought so) and from an outside point of view where people thought he was mad was out of the world. I'm astounded by your style.

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10I loved it. Given that, personally I write such stories, it gives me actual joy seeing the way the sentences weaved past. Except, it was confusing at times to see through, but, I understand it's mainly due to the fact of building curiosity in the reader.

━ GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 9/10There is nothing to point out much here, just try to maintain one tense in a single paragraph.

gonewiththewind03 - 10/10I actually couldn't find any mistakes. So, kudos for that.

━ SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10The anxiousness and fear I had about what is going to happen in the next chapters , throughout the story, tells everything I guess. The emotions and senses were blended perfectly and was enough to make a person eager to know what's coming up. Also, the parts where Jimin snitched or Jin turned out to be someone Yoongi never expected to be (in the alternate ending) were excessively well written.

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10The fact that it creepily exists in real life and the author being able to put it all in such short chapters is commendable. It makes me pity Yoongi rather than hate him here. And the comedy still exists. Yoongi's sassy remarks were top notch. The ending was wild with Jin's confident self again.

━ STRUCTURE. 5 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 5/5As I already mentioned before the starting with Yoongi's past to relating it with the present was done smoothly. The story was well built and the paragraphs were highly reader-friendly.

gonewiththewind03 - 3/5Given that this is a rather short story, the structure is a little messy. It was quite confusing, with the point of view and stuff.

━ IMPRESSION. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 9/10The story held the same stride throughout and was good enough to make a fickle-minded reader like me complete it in one sitting.

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10For me, it was the issue itself. Many mental health disorders are said to be cultivated in the minds of children younger than 14. And this story, just put that across. But, other than that the mystery was a nail-biting at some parts.Hope you come out with the sequel as well.

━ SUMMARY.

taekrokosmos_ - The story starts off with a murder case which was done perfectly without any weapons or evidence and on the other side Yoongi is appreciated by an unknown figure whom he refers to as 'noona' for doing a great job. Later in a flashback, it is shown how Yoongi met his Yoora noona when he was only a child and how she gradually manipulated him to do things like bullying, stealing and finally into murdering. People outside think he is mad for talking to some non-existent person whom nobody can see except him. But things take a turn when the police department finds a clue in the murder case which provides evidence against Yoongi charging him guilty when his noona promised him that she was going to keep him safe from any kind of suspicion.

gonewiththewind03 - The story dwells mainly based on Yoongi and his struggles with his apparent ghost noona, whose just a form of his mind. After killing Ara without any regrets, it shows the escape and capture of Yoongi from the police. The side characters too played quite important role even with hardly two dialogues. It's still a mystery how he choked her with just a button. And how he easily trusted Jimin just because he saw himself in the latter.

━ POINTS. 100

taekrokosmos_ - 93

gonewiththewind03 - 89

━ AVERAGE. 91/ 100

━ HOST REVIEW

AJ- the book is just awesome, i mean the plot idea itself is great, and the sinister vibe just fits perfectly, congratulations, hope you keep winning like this in future!!

2nd. MIXTAPE 열정 (passion)

╔══════ ∘◦ ☆ ◦∘ ══════╗

WHEN THE MOON WATCHES

╚══════ ∘◦ ❉ ◦∘ ══════╝

by: SUGASLUV

[ Sugasluv ]

━ TITLE. 5 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 5/5I think the title goes perfectly with the story. It is soothing and also gives us an idea of what's inside.

gonewiththewind03 - 5/5The title is just calming for me. And it fits the story well. A rather beautiful beginning to a story.

━ COVER. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10 There might not be too much detailing in the cover but still, it surely is an eye-catcher. The white and soft vibes along with the contrasting font just fit perfectly. Along with that Yoongi is a piece of art himself !!

gonewiththewind03 - 7/10Well, I love the cover personally. Yoongi's solo aesthetic picture is well-appreciated, but there's not much creative sense to it. And the title on the white background is soft and smooth. Yet, there could be something related to the story inside. The story is kind of mysterious and dark.

━ DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10The blurb was definitely on point. It does provide a lot of insights on what's inside or what the main plot of the story could be based on.

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10The description is great with words. There is a beautiful weaving of emotions in it. I loved it. It makes you interested in the story to come.

━ PLOT. 20 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 19/20I think one thing which held me on to the story was the emotions and the method of writing. The way the author has arranged the incidents one after another till the end with every knots opening till everything is clear was really perplexing.

gonewiththewind03 - 18/20This plot is realistically fictional. If that makes sense. For human's raw emotions are portrayed, yet the fallen angel adds that element of mystery within it. But, some parts were put in a way, that I found not many people would be in. I mean, there's always the conscience to tell Jina that she was doing wrong. But, still, she went with it. Maybe people still do that, but I haven't encountered such.

━ CHARACTER. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 9/10The characters were mysterious and well-built with the right amount of emotions and menace in them. But the urge to tell Jina what she was doing is wrong was high !!

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10The characters were complex yet in a way it felt real. The last parts were a little blur for me. It felt kind of rushed from the time mia and Jaden talked. Her whereabouts were kind of difficult to track.

━ WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10One thing I appreciate the most about your story was your style of writing. You really have a good grip on the flow. The story was neither paced too fast nor was it slow. It was really well arranged with the right amount of info at the correct timings. That kept the story mysterious till the end.

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10I loved the writing style of the author. It was exceptionally well done. Except some places had extra spaces, which needs a little editing. But that's cool.

━ GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10 I really didn't find any grammatical errors. The tenses were a bit misarranged but the course of the story really made up for it.

gonewiththewind03 - 10/10No mistakes were found on my part at all. And tenses were in check.

━ SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 10/10 The way every emotions have been weaved in the perfect way throughout the story was captivating. It felt like I was experiencing the things along with them. Your portrayal got me hooked till the end.

gonewiththewind03 - 9/10The first paragraph itself captivated me so much so that I couldn't explain how you weaved through the words. There's the slow burn in it. And I'm livin' for that. There's so much going on, with how yoongi still maintains that element of creepiness till his last breath.

━ STRUCTURE. 5 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 4/5 The story was well arranged with the mystery being opened plot by plot and the arrangement was on point. When I first saw your cover I thought it was going to be some soft, fluff book. But the story said otherwise. The creepiness and eerie feeling made me feel butterflies ;-)

gonewiththewind03 - 3/5This here is quite some plot. yet, at some time it was kinda predictable, how Jina was cheating even if Jaden deserved it, it was morally incorrect. From then on, it was like every abusive relationship, saviour comes in. But, later Yoongi disappearing was quite expected.

━ IMPRESSION. 10 pts.

taekrokosmos_ - 9/10 Gurl your overall aesthetics, arrangement and everything was definitely a banger !! I enjoyed reading this book so much. This one's definitely a hit <3

gonewiththewind03 - 8/10It's mysterious, but the cover portrayed it as if it was some fluff and soft. That was kind of a turn-off. It was just sinful yet exciting up till the end. So, that's a plus point.

━ SUMMARY.

taekrokosmos_ - The story takes off with a curious Jina looking out of her window to see her strange neighbor watching the moon every night. Her relationship was going a bit bumpy when she discovers and starts interacting with her neighbor Yoongi and they soon grow close. Some flashbacks makes both feel an unknown connection and craving for each other which they are not aware of.

gonewiththewind03 - The story starts with a curious Jina who finds those mysterious vibes from a certain stranger who looks at the moon every day. Her boyfriend stays with her and dies to lack of magic in their relationship, it seems forced for both, yet they cling onto the last shred of hope. Yoongi has always found himself in that empty void. A flashback connects him to her and that's why he craves for her. After an unfortunate incident of a drunkard, Yoongi vows to protect her. Something that doesn't belong to the both of them still pulls Yoongi and Jina towards each other. Abusive relationships, infidelity, addiction to one other, Yoongi and Jina both alike have their share of problems. With Jaden attempting to kill Jina, and her asking Yoongi to save the other still. Yoongi disappears into the dark only to reincarnate as someone else for their soulmates still stays strong.

━ POINTS. 100

taekrokosmos_ - 96

gonewiththewind03 - 87

━ AVERAGE. 91.5/ 100

━ HOST REVIEW

AJ- the book is really good and on-point for a short story and feels really beautiful!! kudos, on your win!!

1st. MIXTAPE 사랑 (love)

╔═══ ∘◦ ☆ ◦∘ ═══╗

SHINIGAMI

╚═══ ∘◦ ❉ ◦∘ ═══╝

by: RAIMA JEON

[PLAGIARISED !! BLACKLISTED]

this book is plagiarised from ao3 and thus RAIMAJEON / Park_haechul is blacklisted. her awards are null and she is reported from our side. we have removed all the reviews too.

the rest of the marks are...

━ AJ.

congratulations to the ones who made it, good luck to other participants, and thanks to our judges!! anyways, participants, enjoy reading the paragraph both of your judges wrote, they are the best!!

you all will receive the prizes after some time, mostly because i will just send them to you through wattpad only after i am free, stay tuned yayy!!

thank you all for being with mixtape aye!!!