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β AJ. finally mixtapers, the day has arrived for us to announce the KIM NAMJOONΒ category results...
but first, let's have a round of applause for all auditionees(participants), they have worked their level-best on their books, so please do not be disheartened if you didn't make it to the mixtapes.
a big round of applause for our judges too, who spent their precious time judging the books and we all acknowledge and appreciate your efforts.
Judges:: dynamic_dream and June2420
ok, the ones who made it...
3rd. MIXTAPE μ§μ (knowledge)
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MIDNIGHT KISS
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by:Β PERSONA 13
[ persona_13 ]
β TITLE. 5 pts.
dynamic_dream - 5/5 it is mysterious and intriguing
June 2420 - 5- Perfect. The midnight kiss was the main essence in the story.
β COVER. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 6/10 i m not really a fan of the cover it looks very messy so i suggest you change it. also that blue border kind of throws people off.
June 2420Β - 6- The picture used is just perfect according to the story, but it somehow disappears with the excess blue border.
β DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 7/10 the description kind of gave away half the story. try to add more quotes and focus less on describing so as to intrigue readers
June 2420Β - 7- The description is good, it was interesting but not enough to make me really want to read the story.
β PLOT. 20 pts.
dynamic_dream- 19/20 the plot is well made but twisting it a bit more would help instead of keeping this as a simple college au. but it is still progressing so i am hoping it will be great
June 2420Β - 20- The plot was really good. I am in love with it. Not too cheesy, not too boring, just a perfect amount of romance, fight and everything. It wasn't something that will give me goosebumps, it just made me happy while reading it.
β CHARACTER. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 the character development was really good
June 2420Β - 10- The character development was on point. I was able to really feel them.
β WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 i love the writing style, its great and to the point
June 2420Β - 10- I really liked the way the author writes her story. The way any situation was described was really good.
β GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 9/10 i spotted very few any mistakes so far
June 2420Β - 9- Few mistakes but not noticeable.
β SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 9/10 well it had a lot of descriptive writing but sense and emotions are nicely portrayed
June 2420Β - 10- I could really feel the story. Every part was so real, that I could actually picture it in my mind.
β STRUCTURE. 5 pts.
dynamic_dream - 5/5 the structure is well-built
June 2420Β - 5- The story had a really good structure. The way it's written is really good.
β IMPRESSION. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream -Β 9/10 it is good to read
June 2420Β - 10- I personally loved this book. I was really into the story. Pleasant to read. Made me smile for no reason.
β SUMMARY.
dynamic_dream - It is a nice book, and you may certainly want to give it a read, if you are looking for a good Namjoon ff.
June 2420Β - The story is a must-read. If someone is looking for a simple story with the perfect amount of Romance and drama, this is it. It can make you smile for no reason.
β POINTS. 100
dynamic_dream - 89/100
June 2420Β - 92/100
β AVERAGE. 90.5/ 100
β HOST REVIEW
AJ- the judge dynamic_dream is me only, the thing is to change your cover i guess, maybe a bit more attractive one!! so congratulations!!
2nd. MIXTAPE μ΄μ (passion)
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REVELATION
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by: MARIE 0211
[ marie0211 ]
β TITLE. 5 pts.
dynamic_dream - 5/5 it is making me enough curious to read the story
June 2420 - 5- The title is really good. Different and unique.
β COVER. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 9/10 the colours aren't that well contrasted which makes the pic of joon a bit unclear
June 2420 - 10- I really liked the cover. Its really different. I liked how the editing was done.
β DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 its great and just the perfect amount of mystery is present
June2420 - 5- Its good but at the same time a little confusing. It need a little more clearance.
β PLOT. 20 pts.
dynamic_dream- 20/20 its very well made and lovely to read
June 2420 - 17- I liked how the plot goes. But still there was still something missing for me.
β CHARACTER. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 i love the character developments in it
June 2420 - 8- I liked how the characters develop, but there were a few times I felt disconnected with them.
β WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 i am in love with the writing style and the descriptions of everything
June 2420 - 9- I really liked the way the author described the things. It was really good.
β GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 didn't see any mistakes present in it
June 2420 - 8- few mistakes
β SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 they were on point and everything just felt so real
June 2420 - 8- I could feel the emotions but again there were a few times i couldn't feel it much.
β STRUCTURE. 5 pts.
dynamic_dream - 5/5 the structure is good without any holes
June 2420 - 4- Good.
β IMPRESSION. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 it is a good story
June 2420 - 9- Overall, I liked the story, how the story was written and explained. But the description needs a little work. It was a bit too much narrative, if that makes sense.
β SUMMARY.
dynamic_dream - give this story a read you will not regret it, i swear, great work author keep going
June 2420 - I liked the story, how the story was written and explained. But the description needs a little work. It was a bit too much narrative, if that makes sense.
β POINTS. 100
dynamic_dream - 99/100
June 2420 - 83/100
β AVERAGE. 91/ 100
β HOST REVIEW
AJ- the judge dynamic_dream is me only!! so congratulations!!
1st. MIXTAPE μ¬λ (love)
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GUNS AND LOVE
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by: ARMY GIRL 30
[ Army_girl30 ]
β TITLE. 5 pts.
dynamic_dream - 5/5 the title is intriguing and fits the vibe of the story!!
June 2420 - 5- Goes well with the story. Perfect choices of words.
β COVER. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 the cover looks really good and is just fitting with the pics of namjoon and the font in it.
June 2420 - 10- I love the cover. The picture used is hd and the font was also really good.
β DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 the description is just on point in the story and leaves the reader wanting to know more.
June2420 - 10- The story description was written really well. It really made me want to keep reading the story.
β PLOT. 20 pts.
dynamic_dream- 20/20 truth be told the plot is really well made and it is just good and makes me want to read more.
June 2420 - 20- I Loved the plot. The mystery, the romance all was just perfect.
β CHARACTER. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 the character devlopment is just on point
June 2420 - 10- The characters were well described. I could really feel the emotion.
β WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 writing style? i can't even start to define how great it is, keep going!!
June 2420 - 10- The writing style of the author was really good. I loved it.
β GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 6/10 i m really sad to cut so much marks for this but a lot of change of tense was seen and i also saw how wrong words were used. usage of more than three dots are wrong.
June 2420 - 9- Rare punctuations missing but overall not enough to mind.
β SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 10/10 the story made perfect sense and i could feel the emotions
June 2420 - 10- I could really feel the emotions of the story. I was crying, smiling, blushing.
β STRUCTURE. 5 pts.
dynamic_dream - 5/5 the story is very well built
June 2420 - 5- The structure of the story was well divided. I really really enjoyed it.
β IMPRESSION. 10 pts.
dynamic_dream - 9/10 the grammatical mistakes kind of interrupted but other than that everything was great!!
June 2420 - 10- Overall I enjoyed the story. I genuinely loved this story. The emotions, the ideas were on point for me.
β SUMMARY.
dynamic_dream - it is very well written and has proper cliffhangers and plot twist, trust me you will never regret reading this book, because it is beautiful... :)
June 2420 - I personally really love this book. It is my one of my favorite ff, I really loved how the book is written. The emotions were on point, I could really feel every moment of the book.
β POINTS. 100
dynamic_dream - 95/100
June 2420 - 99/100
β AVERAGE. 97/ 100
β HOST REVIEW
AJ- the judge dynamic_dream is me only, the thing is to change your cover i guess, maybe a bit more attractive one!! so congratulations!!
the rest of the marks are...
β AJ.
congratulations to the ones who made it, good luck to other participants, and thanks to our judges, i think!! anyways, i changed some marks of June 2420 mostly because i thought they were too harsh, especially the zero, but do not be disheartened.
i just saw that the 94 liners actually have like the best book in wattpad with the least reads unlike the not-so-great ffs of the other members. i am not talking about the ones in this awards, but in general, like appreciate the 94 line please people!!
you all will receive the prizes after some time, mostly because i will just send them to you through wattpad only after i am free, stay tuned yayy!!Β
thank you all for being with mixtape aye!!!
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