Reviewer: jungkooksistah

Author: EmeraldSeagrave

Book title: 8/10

The title "Novalunosis" is good and suits the story but it can be something much more creative .

Cover:  4/10

The cover of the book is soo messy. Also doesn't tell about the story and not grabbing one's attention. It's good but you should make the cover neat.

Blurb: 7/10

The blurb is short, without a good description of the story. I think it's important to give a description of the story so that readers can really get to know what's going to happen and they get interested. There are also some grammar mistakes, for example the tenses.

Writing style: 9/10

The writing style is pretty good. It's just you need to work on that a little bit.

Character Development:  6/10

I feel like we don't really get to know the character's backstories that well. Knowing what happened before the story could help us get a better understanding. I personally likes Nia's character.

Grammar: 6/10

I am very sorry to say this, but your grammar was not the best. There were soo many typos and grammatical errors.

Vocabulary: 7/10

The vocab you used in your chapters were simple. You should focus on your vocabulary.

Pace: 8/10

I've noticed your story is mostly made up of dialogue near the start, which can give a rushed sense and makes me kind of not want to read it anymore.

Overall Impression: 8/10

Overall the book is good you just need to improve some parts.

Rating on Book : 8/10

Total:  71/100

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