Author : mimisworldx

Reviewed by : As_I_Write

Title : (10/10)

"Sweethearts of New York"

Title is just perfect! It kind of creates interest in the reader as well. It's just perfect to draw readers' attention. For me too, I hopped into the book as soon as the title caught my eyes! Great job!

Cover : (8/10)

Cover looks asthetic and cute too. It gives a glimpse of the fantastic Friendship that the story has presented. It's overall beautiful, my suggestion would be about the fonts used there. Those fonts are so small at the bottom and the color used for it makes it more faint and kind of look mixed up with the cover. At the first I didn't saw them, but got to know when I observed closely. But overall if you see, it's beautiful.

Blurb : (7/10)

The blurb is kind of sweet and gives a vibe of sweet friendship in the story. I kinda feel like it should have been a little bigger. You can add some more lines from the story or give a bigger description about it.

Characters : (10/10)

Characters are overall good. My favorite character could be Erinx. He is kind of cool. After watching the cast, I liked Kendall, she is beautiful. Well Michelle's character is just perfect to create the twists in the story XD. Hehe all of them are nice!

Plot : (8/10)

I didn't get it yet, what's the main problem of the story. The four chapters I read were interesting enough to keep me waiting for the upcoming ones. The fourth chapter

"Watch your back Michelle"

It was the whole confusing but a lot interesting one! One falls for one and the other falls for someone else like haha. XD. But it was great!

Grammar & Stuff : (7/10)       

There were a lot of errors that I spotted. You should cross check ones from the beginning. The first chapter, there were no breakages in the text. Breaking it into paragraphs helps maintaining the reader's interest. Many readers get bored of reading such long paragraphs, so you should consider that. After then, the next chapters, you have break them in one to one lines. That's ok for it. Other thing would be like, don't change point of views just after some paragraphs. You can change them after a chapter or after a long duration in one chapter. Changing the point of views multiple times in a short duration can confuse readers as well.

  Overview : (85/100)

You have done a great job with the story. It's a really interesting teen fiction story. Overall it's nice and I will be waiting for more. You can consider the suggestions I provided throughout the story. Well done! Wish you a great luck for all your upcoming stories. If you have any doubt or felt anything wrong over here, dm me anytime and I will be happy to help.

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With love,
Clara