Author : _JeonK_

Reviewed by : As_I_Write

  Title : (10/10)

"Her Sempiternal Beloved"

Your title is very unique and beautiful. That felt so Asthetic. It can easily draw readers' attention, basically the readers who are interested in such deep poems.

Cover : (8/10)

The cover is overall good. It gives a vibe of beautiful gloomy night where you can see the girl, her feelings. Can see, understand a lot from just one picture. It's just perfect. My only suggestion would be like about that title alignment. The title could have been looked perfect if it could have placed downwards at the bottom of the cover. There in a big simple and bold fonts it would look perfect. Cuz that letters are in inverse font already and it feels like they are between the night sky. So I would like to suggest that.

Blurb : (9/10)

The blurb is just fantastic and catchy. I would like to advise you that you should remove those fonts. Well while fonts make the writings more beautiful, sometimes too much use of that can decrease it's professionalism. If you see here in Wattpad, there's the numerous books out there. Readers usually look at the blurb, it's professionalism and the plot of the story. To make it look more professional, you can either remove all fonts or keep any one of them.

Grammar : (10/10)

Your grammar, punctuations, wordings are just excellent. There's no need to look over this stuff, it's perfect. The way you have put those deep words together and created a beautiful verse, it touched my heart.

Poems : (10/10)

You have arranged all those events so beautifully. The way a girl feels in love and after love. How her feelings, her attitude changes over the situation. As she was broken before and then becomes lovesick. Though after that those memories for her always stay close to her.

My favourite lines were from the last poem were,

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These memories are persisting which cherish,

Her beloved may have stepped back!

But those reminiscences don't perish,

So she adores them close to her wrecked heart always...

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Overview : (95/100)

Superb! Well done!!

Your poems are now so close to my heart. Love the way you presented everything, every moment over there.
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- With love,
Clara