-- Utsuku Shiuso -- Review #6 --
Alright people, number six! This OC was created by @CreepySmileOfLies ! This OC is created to be in the Yandere Simulator Universe!
DISCLAIMER: THIS IS ALL MY OPINION, SO TAKE THE ADVICE HOWEVER YOU LIKE. MY ADVICE IS NOT A PERFECT DEPICTION OF WHAT OCS SHOULD BE LIKE, THIS IS ALL IN MY POV.
I like how the character refers to themselves with the suffix -Sama, since that means they hold themselves in high regard or see themselves as worthy of that title. (To anyone who doesn't know, calling yourself your name then -sama right after means you are somewhat arrogant, as it is given to people with high status and respect in Japan. Giving that title to yourself is like saying "I deserve respect" and kind of refer to yourself as "My esteemed self" ). I fact checked the name, and it indeed means "Beautiful lie" or "Beautiful fib".
Okay uh XD Monika(this is actually Monika from DDLC talking), I didn't make the questions, ask that random dude on Tumblr that I used for my forum( I did mention him on the forum page)! Besides, I like detail :3 (Lowkey, I like the characters little inputs!)
Seeing how it said they don't support anything illegal, it makes me think her sister might have done something wrong...? I haven't read the backstory yet, so I'm going in the entire entry blind. I like doing that since it gives me a fresh opinion :3
Okay, Utsuku's backstory is actually pretty good! My favorite parts are 1- When she makes her blog. I love when protagonists are in a grey area when it comes to good and bad. She made it to help her friend and stop the bullying, and now she does it just to manipulate others! Golden! 2- When the paranoia kicked in. It's very tempting to make the oc want to find the culprit and whatnot, but we also forget about the people that fear for their lives. Utsuku feared she would be next, and trusted the police with the job, leaving the school for her own safety. I also love the fact that you added DDLC characters as AI, nice little touch :3 (BTW, #Monikaisbae #Don'tchangemymind.)
Nothing bad here!
Bro same, blueberries are the bane of my existence, why they gotta taste so mushy and off? XD
I can see the whole paranoia thing, especially with what happened to her. Although, I'm not that versed in the concept of paranoia, if anyone would like to teach me a few things about it, I would like that very much!
I actually looked up if Japanese high schools have prom, and it turns out they don't, they actually have festivals that *might* have dancing! Not really a nitpick, just something I thought was pretty interesting :3
I can relate to her wanting to know who the hell info-chan is XD (I went on so many forums and theories, it is unreal how obsessed I am! XD)
EVERYONE WANTS YOU MONIKA, YOU IS BABY! (Weird how I get attached to characters XD will I stop? no. ;3)
Pet peeves are MMMMMMMMMMMMMM I really relate to those, those peeves piss me off so bad that it personally urks me XD
The defining moment is really good(it looks messy in the way I put them together but I read them, don't worry!) as it shows when Utsuku truly became the person she is today.
Jesus Monika is so cool yet really cunning! XD
Okay, final thoughts! I. Love. Utsuku. PERIOD, NO CAP, THIS CHICK IS AWESOME! I don't see any major flaws in her character design and build-up, her reactions to things are understandable in terms of the story and fandom, and OML she is relatable! The fact that Monika is also answering as well is a nice touch owo. Anyways, 10/10, would talk to again!(sorry this chapter took so long, I had family and school to deal with ack ;-;)
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