5th OC, let's get into it! An original OC based in an original universe by @chaoticani !

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS ALL MY OPINION, SO TAKE THE ADVICE HOWEVER YOU LIKE. MY ADVICE IS NOT A PERFECT DEPICTION OF WHAT OCS SHOULD BE LIKE, THIS IS ALL IN MY POV.

The art at the top is made by the original creator of the OC (in human form)! I actually really like the art style, it has a mature cartoon feel to it!

Okay, I fact-checked if BPD can be inherited, and it is possible through certain genetics and other factors, so nice attention to that! :3 The fact that Richard has to fake a part of himself just to seem approachable fits well with him wanting to be around people. And Autophobia (The fear of being alone or feeling lonely) further supports it.

I actually didn't know you could like/ get with your NIECE (weirds me out XD), but it seems like it's completely legal in the US (as long as they are of age), so I guess I have no retorts. It is illegal where I'm from, though. Other than that weird fact, everything seems coherent. I do want to point out that the "killed most of his/her family" is a bit overdone. It's not bad to use these ideas, far from it, but maybe just have him kill one of his family members. (I lean more towards the mother. The fact that he would kill his sister at age 11 sounds coherent, but it would make sense for him to kill her later on in his life.)

And here is Richard in demon form! Again, art by the creator of the OC! I like how Richard loses his normal eyes and instead has one big yellow eye instead, very cool!

Now, the creator of this oc made a backstory that is very sensitive to certain readers. So, if you don't feel comfortable reading things that contain the topics mentioned above, just skip to the large line at the bottom.

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All I can say is... God damn, Dennis... Chill oml XD (but for real, he sick, cut the man.)

Okay, uh, wth is up with his mom!? Seeing all that and all she does is send him to his room!? GIRL, CALL THE POLICE!! But in all seriousness, it would make more sense that the mother calls the police, but they don't find anything since Richard covered up his tracks very thoroughly.

No points here, seems clean :3

I actually thought that Draven would come in first, but now that I think about it, it would make more sense for Mephisoples to come in first.

Nothing bad here, like it so far.

UUUUUUUUUUUUH XD Okay, I know this is a part of his backstory, but YIKES X 10, Richard really needs God, Jesus, Allah, whatever God is in his universe XD

I kinda want to protect Aeron now, poor baby ;-;

I decided to sensor some things since I don't want to get vibe checked by Wattpad XD But damn, is Richard sick... I'm starting to hate him a lot. XD

OOf there goes the wife too.

I said it once and I will say it again; Richard is sick yikes X 20 XD

(Although I don't agree with Richard's morals and such), his obsession with Aeron and how he wanted to go after this girl who resembled her fits the story well. 

... Yikes X 30 XD

And this is the end of his backstory! I like how there isn't a clear ending afterwards, since that leaves it up to the reader and what would happen to Richard afterwards is a pure mystery! It did say that people under Mephistopheles suffer, so TAKE THAT, YOU PEDO! XD I really liked the story though, no joke! The attention to detail is very nice and the mature themes of this story really hit different.

Now, this is Carla (The mother of Richard) and she's pretty uwu

I wish I can show other pics like Susie( his sister) and his niece, but I reached the limit of pics in the chapter ack! So, Final thoughts! I love this character in terms of a twisted protagonist. I don't mind the whole "killed most of his family" thing, but maybe just have Susie die of natural causes? Just a thought of mine :3