Review #12 for an OC by the user @CreepySmileOfLies! Let's go!

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS ALL MY OPINION, SO TAKE THE ADVICE HOWEVER YOU LIKE. MY ADVICE IS NOT A PERFECT DEPICTION OF WHAT OCS SHOULD BE LIKE, THIS IS ALL IN MY POV.

This one was long, so sorry for the late review (I have 50+ screenshots to edit into the limit of screenshots in a chapter, which is 20, F in the comments to pay respects to my editing program. But I can't complain cuz I asked for detail, I got detail baby!)

(Editor Mirror note: Someone applaud me, I got 50+ screenshots to less than 20 HEYO!! Anyways, enough of editor woes.)

(DISCLAIMER: THIS OC REVIEW HAS MENTIONS OF S*ICIDE AND D*ATH.)

1- The fact that there is Mario Kart makes me laugh so hard-- Like, just an oc drifting like crazy past a freaking toad XD IDK why is is funny to me, it just is.

2- Touhou was an obsession mine way back, I know what you mean.

3- I tried getting into Gacha but seeing the fanbase made me go "Okay... I might be on a watchlist after this, so no." XD (The fact it has 18+ content... for a kids dress up game--- jgaSBFKJHRGJDjfhDFJKHGEDF nope not today Satan.)

4- I suggest you start Danganronpa from the beginning, as it gives SOME context to whatever the heck goes on the world + references and cool stuff :3

What's heartbreaking is the upbringing doesn't apply to Linda's sister or her father, as they both treated her like crap, shows their hypocrisy. Nice detail!

1- Talia is the definition of a brat, which I like. A lot of sibling relationships seem to revolve around either "unconditional love" or "polar opposites clashing". I don't know much about Talia, but she doesn't seem THAT far off from her sister. At the very least, they were taught the same principles, but she still chose to be rude to her sister.

2- The fact that her parents dismiss Talia's abuse as Linda misinterpreting is a very real thing that goes on irl. It's a good detail to show, as not all abusive relationships in family needs to be with "older abusing younger" dynamics. Even older people can be, for lack of a better word, gullible to red flags.

3- The part where Linda wants to make others happy really hits home for me. I cam empathize with her on this point quite a bit.

4- THE FACT THAT THOSE OBSESSED PEOPLE WANTED AN IRL SHIP TO HAPPEN-- mm, no, that ain't cute. I have encountered actual people like this, trying to force people to fall in love (even when the person wasn't of their preference) and interfere with anyone who tried to get in the way. Absolute nutcases.

5- The principal is scum, Period.

6- The breakup is a sad event that highlights the toxicity surrounding them, when they both wanted nothing but to make each other happy. The crowd is the problem, and breaking up in front of them highlights that.

7- Ben is also scum.

8- The fact that Talia is still the angel, when her dad CLEALRY saw her belittle Linda, is baffling to me and that frustration is a good emotion to feel when reading a book. NOT TOO MUCH THOUGH, it should be at the bare minimum when it comes to character's story, and it should be for good reason. This part is a good example of that, showing the father's hypocrisy.

9- The death almost made me cry bro--

10- KAREN OML--- XD

11- Monokuma being a part of the Forgotten club is just perfection, I can't with that monochrome beartrap XD And Flowey being a little shit and taking the bear's place is also golden.

12- The ending of her backstory is really cool, I liked it a lot!

1- The scar is a nice detail!

2- The bags are also a nice detail, nodding to her insomnia.

3- The grim reaper drinking is the type of aesthetic I never thought I wanted to see, but I appreciate the idea being put in my head :3

4- I feel like her expressiveness should lean more toward "Not trying to smile at all, since she died thinking faking her feelings wasn't enough." It would fit more with her character post-death, I think.

5- I want to see Linda throw some f*cking hands please XD

1- Never thought I'd hear "Gacha Club" in the underworld. I am surprised almost every day by the internet.

2- Poor Goethe, I hate hearing about pet deaths ;-; But it does show just how terrible Talia is.

Nothing here out of the ordinary.

I like the powers, fitting for a Grim Reaper!

I imagine Linda just bursting through the main hall in Danganronpa and going "I'm back b*tches!!!" and I just laugh so hard XD Also, I wonder who is the main character if she is a sidekick.

Um-- I almost cried bro-- ;-; The defining moment hits home for me.

Linda pics!

In conclusion: I love this chick, a lot of depth and detail went into this oc. I just wish something good happens in the end of her story, I wish it happens :3