HIYA! BACK AT IT WITH ANOTHER REVIEW!

Review #14 for an OC by the user @CreepySmileOfLies! Let's go!

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS ALL MY OPINION, SO TAKE THE ADVICE HOWEVER YOU LIKE. MY ADVICE IS NOT A PERFECT DEPICTION OF WHAT OCS SHOULD BE LIKE, THIS IS ALL IN MY POV.

SPOILER WARNING FOR THE DANGANRONPA SERIES!

WARNING: MENTIONS OF MOL*STATION

Is the character actually a ghost? Or is it just saying how students ignore her? If she IS a ghost, I like that their talent is their actual being (the only other person we see like this in the series is K1-B0, with him being the Ultimate Robot)

1- She almost reminds me of Toko, with her not taking compliments and accepting she was a negative presence, her somewhat of a perverted outlook on things, etc... I do like this type of character personality, as it does break some of the "Happy-go-lucky" type protagonist trope.

2- I tried translating the Japanese words, and what I got was "Beauty girl" and "Ugly/Indiscernible spirit"(Correct me if I'm wrong though, I tried to find the meanings that made most sense.)

I didn't really understand this part, can you please explain the notes part? Once I understand it, I'll edit the chapter with the new info :3

Nothing wrong here!

Nothing wrong here!

I do like the idea of Mei being, at the very least, a supportive best friend to Agathe. Mei seems like a good character, so I wouldn't want them to be some antagonist character. But at the end of day, the choice is up to you if Mei ends up in a relationship with Agathe :3

Nothing wrong here, the friends seem cool!

I do want to know more about Shokuyoku, she seems interesting.

Nothing Wrong here!

Okay, I like Alphonse character :3 IDK why, but Gangster characters are always my fav as long as they aren't scum to their family. Like, they actually have honor.

1- Did the father ACTUALLY molest the mother and kids? Or is that a lie from the mother?

2- I LOVE Armand already :3 I do want to know more about him though, like personality wise.  What is his relationship with Agathe?

I will say that I do want a specific reason for the mother's behavior towards her daughter. Anything trivial will do too, it just seems fitting for her to have some motive behind her actions.

I do love the origin of the names being from a viral video about Agathe.

I can imagine how discouraged Agathe felt when she saw that all she was known for was what she hated. Hell, Ultimate weeb would have been acceptable T-T

I am leaning for the Poisoned fate. It seems fitting that Manaka, who seemed to fear Agathe, to be one of the culprits.

I LOVE this execution, I wouldn't change a thing about it!

1- What I can tell, "Impayable" means Priceless in French? I want to know why she screamed that?

2- I do love the idea of a fanbase, kind of like how Slender man and the other creepypastas have large fanbases too.

I LOVE THIS-- oml my obsession with Japanese Urban legends is unreal.

SOUNDTRACKS FOR AGATHE:

https://youtu.be/Zzo6L3wsf8c

https://youtu.be/BwPbUA1QNdo

Nothing to say about the soundtracks, they seem to fit Agathe's whole vibe!

IN CONCLUSION: I do like Agathe's character, but I am just a bit lost about a few things (which I asked above in my comments). Once I get the full picture, I will fix up the review and make sure everything is looked through again and reviewed properly :3