So I just read the first chapter of a certain book on Wattpad which will not be named.
I got halfway through the chapter and I had to stop just so I wouldn't throw my iPad across the room.

So the main problem with it (mostly generalized)

The main character
The main character is FREAKING PERFECT.
I'll just say how-

She knows every fighting technique invented.
Ok, that is almost literally impossible.
And improbable.

And she's a a hybrid with an overused backstory.
You know the story. The "was kidnapped and was taken to a laboratory where the character was experimented on and turned into a hybrid."

Not to mention that her mom died, but that's probably just me nitpicking.

Ok. Now, to those of you planning on writing a story, try not to do something like that.

I'll go now.