Comments/Critiques/Feedback

What next?

The sequel is up! Check the next page, or click on the external link below, or go to my author's page to find it. "Shadows"

Feedback

I hope to get some critical feedback from all of you. I am planning on self-publishing this novel as soon as possible (after a few drafts of course), so please tell me what you think I need to improve on.

Descriptions? Emotions? Characters? Setting? The more thorough and detailed your responses, the more I have to work with to address the issues that lurk within the crevasses of this story. :)

Thoughts on the title?

So, I think my title is blah... don't you agree? Or did "Zara's Wolf" catch your attention? I've been thinking about what to change it to. What do you think having read the story? Which is more catchy/attention-grabbing to you? I can't decide, and usually titles aren't an issue for me.

Hidden / Hidden Truth

The Unknown

Trust / Trust in You

What Lies Within

Courage / Give Me Courage

After the Storm

Or you can make your own suggestion and I'll add it to the list.

Also, would anyone be interested in making a book trailer for me? I feel so weird asking for this...

Again, thank you so much for reading and for all of your feedback! I really appreciate it. :)

Feel free to follow me here on Wattpad (for upcoming stories) and on twitter at JoLeeHunt ( https://twitter.com/JoLeeHunt ) and fan my Facebook page ( https://www.facebook.com/JoLeeHunt ).

Thanks, and feel free to PM me or comment anytime! I'm always happy to interact with my readers. :D


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