Thank mainly  LPKnits  for this review!

Title:

The title is very apt for the story.

Cover:

The cover is okay, but we think since it's an image of two people in love, there should be a little brightness added to its dim nature. This makes one view the ups, through the bright colours and the downs, through the dim colours, of love as a whole.

Such covers will be sure to attract more readers.

Blurb:

You wrote a very good blurb. I was quite curious to find out what the main character's past was and how it will affect her together with the present and Carra's connection to all this. This led to the general urgency to know more about Jo and the story altogether.

Plot:

Through the plot, one gets answers to Jo's life and the novel as well. As one keeps reading, he or begins to take interest in Jo and Carra and their beautiful love story.

The Death part was certainly the most enjoyable part of the novel, but that doesn't mean the Wollard concept shouldn't be given credit where it is due.

Characters:

As the chapters go on, the characters are seen to evolve through the series of events which occur. They show the right forms of emotion the reader can relate to to some extent.

Grammar:

There are no major grammatical and typo errors. The punctuations are placed meticulously.

Generally,

Your novel tells are wonderful story which is bound to touch many hearts soon enough.

Thank you so much for requesting! Do check out "After Time" by Kei_Angelus!
Have a wonderful day and expect more updates soon. Keep requesting!

Once again, thanks so much for your wonderful perspective LPKnits !

There is still one novel left to be posted and I can assure you that the person will be done soon enough!

Thanks for your support and have a wonderful day!